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Chapter 8- Anti-Noob Fortress: Jerem and Hunter work for Smogon and Adrian's locked up!
Prologue
In the beginning, there was only a churning turmoil of chaos. At the heart of chaos, where all thing became one, appeared an Egg. Having tumbled from the vortex the Egg gave rise to the Original One.
From itself, two beings the Original One did make. Time started to spin. Space began to expand. From itself again, three living being the Original One did make.
The two beings wishes, and from them, matter came to be. The three living things wished, and from them, spirit came to be. The world created, the Original One took to unyielding sleep... Only to battle against the Evil One, in a battle that lasts forever...
"Hey, cut it out, I'm trying to think!" a guy shouted. Some girls stopped laughing, far in the corridor. "Damn new Libelldrans..." Adrian Overwin grunted. He was a tall boy, with an age of 16. The black sheep of the Libelldra Building. For two reasons: He always dressed in black clothes and distinguished himself from the others by his ability to play either Theorymon or Battlemon, a rare skill. That skill usually isn't good, as it is more difficult to either think with such knowledgement or to battle against members of TLB, The Libelldra Building.
"Now, with all apart... Betray not your anger, lest ??? will come. Weep not with sorrow, or ??? will draw near. When joy and enjoyment come... that is happiness. Let such be blessed by the hand of Master ???. What does this..." And Adrian fell asleep.
Adrian woke up. It was night. And as he knew, everyone under 18 in the library during the night would be expelled from The Libelldra Building. "Oh shit. Now how will I..." And he stopped suddenly. A girl screamed, not far from where he was.
[QUOTE]Now what will Adrian do? YOU DECIDE!
1.) Go find the girl.
2.) Go find the porn section.
3.) GTFO before someone catches you there.[/QUOTE]
In the beginning, there was only a churning turmoil of chaos. At the heart of chaos, where all thing became one, appeared an Egg. Having tumbled from the vortex the Egg gave rise to the Original One.
From itself, two beings the Original One did make. Time started to spin. Space began to expand. From itself again, three living being the Original One did make.
The two beings wishes, and from them, matter came to be. The three living things wished, and from them, spirit came to be. The world created, the Original One took to unyielding sleep... Only to battle against the Evil One, in a battle that lasts forever...
"Hey, cut it out, I'm trying to think!" a guy shouted. Some girls stopped laughing, far in the corridor. "Damn new Libelldrans..." Adrian Overwin grunted. He was a tall boy, with an age of 16. The black sheep of the Libelldra Building. For two reasons: He always dressed in black clothes and distinguished himself from the others by his ability to play either Theorymon or Battlemon, a rare skill. That skill usually isn't good, as it is more difficult to either think with such knowledgement or to battle against members of TLB, The Libelldra Building.
"Now, with all apart... Betray not your anger, lest ??? will come. Weep not with sorrow, or ??? will draw near. When joy and enjoyment come... that is happiness. Let such be blessed by the hand of Master ???. What does this..." And Adrian fell asleep.
Adrian woke up. It was night. And as he knew, everyone under 18 in the library during the night would be expelled from The Libelldra Building. "Oh shit. Now how will I..." And he stopped suddenly. A girl screamed, not far from where he was.
[QUOTE]Now what will Adrian do? YOU DECIDE!
1.) Go find the girl.
2.) Go find the porn section.
3.) GTFO before someone catches you there.[/QUOTE]
First off:
1.
Second off:
He always dressed (in) black clothes and (was) distinguished (himself) from the others by its ability to play either Theorymon or Battlemon, a rare skill.
The added words make the sentence make sense, although you should use either "was" or "himself". Also, change "its" to "his," since Adrian is a human male. Oh, and it should be "knowledge," not "knowledgement."
I think there might be some other stuff, but I don't feel like going over it right now. Just give it a little proofread.
1.
Second off:
He always dressed (in) black clothes and (was) distinguished (himself) from the others by its ability to play either Theorymon or Battlemon, a rare skill.
The added words make the sentence make sense, although you should use either "was" or "himself". Also, change "its" to "his," since Adrian is a human male. Oh, and it should be "knowledge," not "knowledgement."
I think there might be some other stuff, but I don't feel like going over it right now. Just give it a little proofread.
1. won clearly. If you disagree, do your own story.
Chapter 1: Haunt and battle
"I'm coming, I'm coming!" Adrian yelled, looking for the girl. He searched the entire library, but no luck. The air was filled with another terrible scream. Turns out, the girl was just behind him.
"What happened?" Adrian asked. The girl did not reply. "Let's get the **** out of here while we can!" The girl did not move. "What the ****** hell?" He tried to move the girl but she was much like a stone.
"Oh well." Adrian walked towards the exit. The girl vanished. WTF was that? OMG, it's 2 o'clock! I'm going to be expelled! He ran and ran and ran, exited the building and went straight home.
The next morning...
Adrian entered the Libelldra Building. "Today, it's the Flygon Cup day. And if I remember correctly, I'm first." Adrian took the elevator to the stadium.
"Welcome to the Flygon Cup! It's the semifinals! First, it will be... Chase «CrossDragon» Dickens vs. Adrian «Ominous Doom» Overwin! 1 Pokémon vs. 1 Pokémon, with NO RULES: STONE COLD" the announcer said. Chase looked right into Adrian's eyes, from across the stadium.
[QUOTE]How will they battle? What Pokémons are they going to use? YOU DECIDE!
1.) TyraniBoah vs. DDNite
2.) SpSweepZapdos vs. SashMega
3.) TyraniBoah vs. SashMega
4.) SpSweepZapdos vs. DDNite[/QUOTE]
Chapter 1: Haunt and battle
"I'm coming, I'm coming!" Adrian yelled, looking for the girl. He searched the entire library, but no luck. The air was filled with another terrible scream. Turns out, the girl was just behind him.
"What happened?" Adrian asked. The girl did not reply. "Let's get the **** out of here while we can!" The girl did not move. "What the ****** hell?" He tried to move the girl but she was much like a stone.
"Oh well." Adrian walked towards the exit. The girl vanished. WTF was that? OMG, it's 2 o'clock! I'm going to be expelled! He ran and ran and ran, exited the building and went straight home.
The next morning...
Adrian entered the Libelldra Building. "Today, it's the Flygon Cup day. And if I remember correctly, I'm first." Adrian took the elevator to the stadium.
"Welcome to the Flygon Cup! It's the semifinals! First, it will be... Chase «CrossDragon» Dickens vs. Adrian «Ominous Doom» Overwin! 1 Pokémon vs. 1 Pokémon, with NO RULES: STONE COLD" the announcer said. Chase looked right into Adrian's eyes, from across the stadium.
[QUOTE]How will they battle? What Pokémons are they going to use? YOU DECIDE!
1.) TyraniBoah vs. DDNite
2.) SpSweepZapdos vs. SashMega
3.) TyraniBoah vs. SashMega
4.) SpSweepZapdos vs. DDNite[/QUOTE]
@ MD: Thanks.:)
So, without further ado, here's chapter 2! A. won!
BTW, all the battles here are going to be performed RPG style, not Shoddy style. So that we're clear, 'k?
Chapter 2: Dealin' with Sands
"Tyranitar!!! Rape'em!" Chase ordered, throwing a green and black Pokéball. A huge Tyranitar was released, whipping a SandStorm right away. Adrian did not flinch, but was surprised. Tyranitar was a tough Pokémon, either to control and fight.
"Hehe... Dragonite, blast'em all to hell!" Adrian sent out a Dragonite, in a dark Pokéball. The Dragonite roared right away. It was going to be a fierce battle.
"Dragonite, Dragon Dance! We need to take as little damage as possible!" The Dragonite flew upwards, then to fly up and down, right and left, performing an attack known as Dragon Dance, only to boost its Attack and Speed. A "Tyranitar, use Substitute!" yell from across the stadium. The Tyranitar put a Rhydon Doll in front of itself, for protection.
A guy in the audience shouted "F***'em! End them right now, Cross!" Adrian looked to the source. Jth.
"Let's end it right now!" Adrian yelled. "Dragonite... BRICK BREAK!" The Dragonite flew quickly at the Rhydon Doll, punching it and breaking it. But the attack left it unprepared to retaliation and the Tyranitar blasted it with an Ice Beam, weakening it.
Tyranitar: 87%
Dragonite: 21%
"We have little time! Brick Break, quick!" Adrian's Dragonite flew once again towards the Tyranitar. "Ice Beam." Chase ordered coldly. Dragonite was hit right in the kisser and thrown against the wall.
Tyranitar: 93%
Dragonite: 0%
"Chase Dickens wins!" Chase lifted his arm but...
"Murder! Jerem Boy was murdered!" A girl screamed, running towards Fantasty. Then, she fainted.
[QUOTE]What? Jerem Boy was murdered? By who? When? How? YOU DECIDE!
1.) A Feraligatr ate him.
2.) Cold-blood murder. Via stabbing.
3.) *Insert your answer here.*[/QUOTE]
So, without further ado, here's chapter 2! A. won!
BTW, all the battles here are going to be performed RPG style, not Shoddy style. So that we're clear, 'k?
Chapter 2: Dealin' with Sands
"Tyranitar!!! Rape'em!" Chase ordered, throwing a green and black Pokéball. A huge Tyranitar was released, whipping a SandStorm right away. Adrian did not flinch, but was surprised. Tyranitar was a tough Pokémon, either to control and fight.
"Hehe... Dragonite, blast'em all to hell!" Adrian sent out a Dragonite, in a dark Pokéball. The Dragonite roared right away. It was going to be a fierce battle.
"Dragonite, Dragon Dance! We need to take as little damage as possible!" The Dragonite flew upwards, then to fly up and down, right and left, performing an attack known as Dragon Dance, only to boost its Attack and Speed. A "Tyranitar, use Substitute!" yell from across the stadium. The Tyranitar put a Rhydon Doll in front of itself, for protection.
A guy in the audience shouted "F***'em! End them right now, Cross!" Adrian looked to the source. Jth.
"Let's end it right now!" Adrian yelled. "Dragonite... BRICK BREAK!" The Dragonite flew quickly at the Rhydon Doll, punching it and breaking it. But the attack left it unprepared to retaliation and the Tyranitar blasted it with an Ice Beam, weakening it.
Tyranitar: 87%
Dragonite: 21%
"We have little time! Brick Break, quick!" Adrian's Dragonite flew once again towards the Tyranitar. "Ice Beam." Chase ordered coldly. Dragonite was hit right in the kisser and thrown against the wall.
Tyranitar: 93%
Dragonite: 0%
"Chase Dickens wins!" Chase lifted his arm but...
"Murder! Jerem Boy was murdered!" A girl screamed, running towards Fantasty. Then, she fainted.
[QUOTE]What? Jerem Boy was murdered? By who? When? How? YOU DECIDE!
1.) A Feraligatr ate him.
2.) Cold-blood murder. Via stabbing.
3.) *Insert your answer here.*[/QUOTE]
@ CrossDragon: You only realized that now?
ZOMGs, here it comes! 1 wins! Chapter 3 is up! With lots of stupidness!
Chapter 3: No Mercy
Many started screaming. The Master, Fane Tastic, woke up the girl. "Where is him? Where is him?"
"111... Tower... Desert..." She said weakly.
"It's not that far away. Gardy, Teleport us all!" Fane Tastic threw a PokéBall into the air and everyone disappeared...
The sandstorm raged. Jerem Boy's body was laying in the entrance of a tower. It had multiple bites scattered around his body.
"Cause of death... Feraligatr attack." Fane said, then leaving the body away. Then... A lone Feraligatr charged against Fane, which ducked, and it hit Adrian instead.
"GATR!" (Fuck you, Fane!) "GAAAATR!" (More Jerem! Lemme eat'im!) Jerem's Feraligatr had killed his master and was now attacking Fane Tastic.
[QUOTE]What is this? Feraligatr turned against his master? Why? And what will Adrian do? YOU DECIDE!
1.) GTFO while you can.
2.) Get stupid and fight Feraligatr with your bare hands.
3.) Rescue everyone else and battle.[/QUOTE]
I'm also accepting new characters to appear. This is the format:
Name:
Pokémon:
Role:
Stay tuned for more OWNAGE.
ZOMGs, here it comes! 1 wins! Chapter 3 is up! With lots of stupidness!
Chapter 3: No Mercy
Many started screaming. The Master, Fane Tastic, woke up the girl. "Where is him? Where is him?"
"111... Tower... Desert..." She said weakly.
"It's not that far away. Gardy, Teleport us all!" Fane Tastic threw a PokéBall into the air and everyone disappeared...
The sandstorm raged. Jerem Boy's body was laying in the entrance of a tower. It had multiple bites scattered around his body.
"Cause of death... Feraligatr attack." Fane said, then leaving the body away. Then... A lone Feraligatr charged against Fane, which ducked, and it hit Adrian instead.
"GATR!" (Fuck you, Fane!) "GAAAATR!" (More Jerem! Lemme eat'im!) Jerem's Feraligatr had killed his master and was now attacking Fane Tastic.
[QUOTE]What is this? Feraligatr turned against his master? Why? And what will Adrian do? YOU DECIDE!
1.) GTFO while you can.
2.) Get stupid and fight Feraligatr with your bare hands.
3.) Rescue everyone else and battle.[/QUOTE]
I'm also accepting new characters to appear. This is the format:
Name:
Pokémon:
Role:
Stay tuned for more OWNAGE.
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