Forums · Chapter One: Life...
Zero made me do it.
Okay people, this is a giant leap of faith. This is my story and, regardless of how original it may or may not, I'm very paranoid over it. After I post this, I'm not posting anything in sequence - Hell, I'm not even going to post the whole first chapter.
Now that that's out of the way; link to my prologue: http://www.libelldra.com/community/forums/topic/1762/autobiography/
Also, please forgive any spelling and grammatical error as well as inconsistencies in fluency. This is way before the editing process. But the beginning of the story is all here, and my writing technique is there too. Criticize as you will, but don't be too harsh. Please >.>
Also no pictures for Zero.
One last thing, the names aren't all final. Manick, Thomas and Ceara Molecule and uh, I thinks that it for this chapter, are the only names I'm not going to change. The other names, I'm open to suggestion. It's just that I thought they were cool when I was younger, so I've stuck with them until something else comes along. Manick, for example, is a name I've already since changed. You don't want to know what his name used to be. It was that bad.
If I see this anywhere, so help me God >.> </paranoia> OKAY FINE I'LL POST THE WHOLE DAMNED CHAPTER.
Decided to delete it, topic was inactive. Paranoid.
You'll see just at the end here, I quite blatantly break the fourth wall. Here I'm not sure to make it so that little Atom is talking to the reader, or to the character in the Prologue. The only thing I know for sure is that, regardless, the same story is being told. I'm hoping someone will point out any inconsistencies with my tenses and whatnot (present tense instead of past, leaving out the "n't" or putting an "ed" instead of an "ing" -- I'm good at doing all of those quite frequently).
And well, that's that. Hopefully without regret.
Now that that's out of the way; link to my prologue: http://www.libelldra.com/community/forums/topic/1762/autobiography/
Also, please forgive any spelling and grammatical error as well as inconsistencies in fluency. This is way before the editing process. But the beginning of the story is all here, and my writing technique is there too. Criticize as you will, but don't be too harsh. Please >.>
Also no pictures for Zero.
One last thing, the names aren't all final. Manick, Thomas and Ceara Molecule and uh, I thinks that it for this chapter, are the only names I'm not going to change. The other names, I'm open to suggestion. It's just that I thought they were cool when I was younger, so I've stuck with them until something else comes along. Manick, for example, is a name I've already since changed. You don't want to know what his name used to be. It was that bad.
If I see this anywhere, so help me God >.> </paranoia> OKAY FINE I'LL POST THE WHOLE DAMNED CHAPTER.
Decided to delete it, topic was inactive. Paranoid.
You'll see just at the end here, I quite blatantly break the fourth wall. Here I'm not sure to make it so that little Atom is talking to the reader, or to the character in the Prologue. The only thing I know for sure is that, regardless, the same story is being told. I'm hoping someone will point out any inconsistencies with my tenses and whatnot (present tense instead of past, leaving out the "n't" or putting an "ed" instead of an "ing" -- I'm good at doing all of those quite frequently).
And well, that's that. Hopefully without regret.