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ElatedVenusaur

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Oct 15 '07

Lynne didn't trust people. No, she knew how horrid they were. Even the most-famed and well-thought of were jackals, preying upon the weak, slaughtering and killing without remorse. She had seen the "best" at work. And she hated her. Even so, there was something about dancing that made her smile. She loved dancing, but she always had her friends play for her. Her friends didn't dance, or, rather, wouldn't. Even the strongest summoning ward didn't make a demon, even a lowly imp, one's pawn. She'd have to work on that. She decided, to her own surprise, she should go to a ball. Perhaps, it was an attempt by a part of her to remake the illusion of her youth: that people were good. But she didn't care. She would dance, and she would control and she would give herself to reckless frolick, as the music demanded. She surveyed herself in a mirror. She was pretty, she supposed. Her skin was pale, and her hair was dark, and her eyes were a light shade of brown. She wasn't lacking in anything: no doubt her body would arouse the bestial urges of any man. How disguisting, she shuddered. But she wanted to dance. It would have to be suffered. She wore a red dress, with plenty of lace and silk: her favorite dress. Her ritual dress.

Her friends helped her there, through the shortcut of Hell. She arrived, with all the icy distance she thought was considered beautiful. She watched the men and women twirl. Couples, spouses, flings of romance, and random acts of dancing. She stood among the unclaimed, the women without anyone to dance with. One by one, a man collected the other woman, and off they went dancing. Laughing and gyrating, in joy and wonder. Her eyes filled with desperation. Her heart pulsed. Her mind raced. She resembled something of a wounded animal. Why hadn't anyone danced with her? Why didn't a man come to her? She sat and waited. And waited. And waited.

And then it was ending, and she filled with rage. She stomped forward and shouted, "How dare you, you offal! How could you deny me? How could you ignore me? I just wanted to dance!" Tears streamed. People stared and murmured. They reacted as though she had just sprung into existence. They began to scream as she started casting, hissing syllables in some terrible language many guessed correctly to be demonic. People ran, terrified...but a twisted smile formed on Lynne's lips, even as the tears gushed. They couldn't get away. One of her friends appeared, a mighty demon with teeth like a lion's that towered over all of them, grinning demonically. It enthusiastically set to work, producing a massive trident from thin air, thrashing its horrible-spiked tail about, and casting spells of flame and ruin. People were screaming and dying. The ballroom was burning....and she loved it. She laughed, still crying. Laughed manaically. So...this was what it was to kill, to conquer, to murder...to slaughter. She became drunk on it. When it was over, long after, she was lying there, laughing and crying.

Alfred surveyed the carnage and smiled at his handiwork. The girl never even noticed the invisibility charm he had placed on her. She was, after all, just a summoner. She would be ripe for the plucking, soon. He loved the delicious irony of gaining an ally from the loins of one who had been one of his staunchest opponents. May it disturb her restful peace....
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gameboy

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Oct 15 '07

That certainly is intresting.
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ElatedVenusaur

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Oct 29 '07

That's the censored version. As in, I censored potential spoilers, specifically the identity of her mother and her mother's killer. I shall post another, but I feel the need to revise it...
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OtterWater

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Oct 29 '07

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The balor appeared, and went to work. People were screaming and dying.


The balor? Like the D&D monster?
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ElatedVenusaur

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Oct 30 '07

QUOTE (OtterWater @ Oct 29 2007, 08:42 PM)
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The balor appeared, and went to work. People were screaming and dying.


The balor? Like the D&D monster?

Hmmm. Yes, but the text should be telling you that. My bad. I sometimes forget minor details like that.
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bobblyhead

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Oct 30 '07

Yeah, I was confused on what a balor was. Still, this is a great story. Are you making more?
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ElatedVenusaur

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Oct 31 '07

QUOTE (bobblyhead @ Oct 30 2007, 10:28 PM)
Yeah, I was confused on what a balor was. Still, this is a great story. Are you making more?

I assure you, there's a lot buzzing around in my head. I'll probably spend the next few decades trying to hammer it into a coherent narrative.

Edit: There. I think I managed to fit it in such a way that it fits, I think. I'm a fluency freak.
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ElatedVenusaur

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Nov 9 '07

Terrine hunkered down in a supply cart, which wasn’t so easy for her to do. She was a tall woman, and having to scrunch herself up so inevitably gave her cramps and tousled her short, sun-blonde hair. She dismissed that thought as unnecessary, and focused on the job ahead, idly fingering the sword hilt at her belt. The supply cart was going to the Desert Topaz Palace, home of the Kurikan Emperor. At some point, those words were feared, and brought nervous murmurs, but Kurikas hadn’t had such power in a while now. A succession of inept children had taken the thrown in recent years, leaving government firmly in the clutches of the corrupt court. The words were a joke now. The cart would stop near the kitchens, when the soldiers escorting the cart would leave it there and a lone kitchen worker would come out to collect the following day’s supplies. He wouldn’t be missed…….
Suddenly, they come unto the cobblestones and Terrine’s stomach began to lurch as though it were doing somersaults in her belly.
“You look pale. Are you alright?” came the voice of Terrine’s compatriot. Terrine had nearly forgotten the bone-thin woman who happened to be a necromancer. It seemed anachronistic for a necromancer to be so benign.
“You get motion sickness, don’t you?” Lily continued, her watery green eyes filled with concern. Terrine scowled and replied,
“I’ll be fine, you needn’t worry about it.”
Lily shook her head (or as much as she could manage) and her curly black hair, which fell in childish locks in front of her eyes bobbed back and forth. If anything, they made Terrine sicker.
“It’s nothing but a simple cantrip. I’m a woman too, you don’t have to be all tough and manly around me,” Lily intoned, frowning slightly.
Terrine’s icy blue eyes widened with wonder. A young, motherly necromancer. The woman more closely matched her name than her profession.
“Fine, I’m sorry. I do get motion sick,” Terrine grinned nervously, “quite easily actually. They’d hear me throwing up, or, failing that, they’d smell it…,” Terrine said, softening a little. Lily nearly immediately began casting the cantrip, the strange arcane syllables mixing rhythmically with the load clunks of the cobblestones on the road to the Palace. Finally, Lily made a slight motion with one hand towards Terrine’s stomach, and Terrine immediately felt better, if not completely well.
Terrine smiled and said quizzically, “Thanks. But…how is it a necromancer knows healing arts?”
Lily only regarded her coolly and said, “Life and death are sides of the same coin. At least, that's what my mother always used to say.”
Terrine was purely fascinated by this. She had always found magic interesting, but lacked the opportunity and the talent to pursue the magical arts in her youth.
“Maybe you could explain that a little over a nice mug of ale after this job?” Terrine asked hopefully.
Lily looked at her funny and said, “But…I need to stu-“
Terrine looked at her firmly, and whispered, “You can study your spells any time. C’mon, it’ll be fun! Just the two of us and great frothing mugs of good, strong ale!”
Lily sighed and simply nodded in acquiescence.
Suddenly, the cart came to a stop, and the guards loaded something; something yellow-ish scratchy cubes…hay. Lily sneezed loudly and distinctly feminine. The escorts were all male; there would be no doubt where it came from…
Terrine sprang from the cart, drawing her sword in one swift, flowing motion, swinging it wildly. An arrow glanced off of her left shoulder guard and Terrine quickly found the archer with her eyes, launching her sword through the air, catching the unlucky archer clean through the chest. A moment later, Lily sprang forth as well with an ominous arcane word and a sweeping pass of her arm, ripping a skeletal warrior from the archer’s corpse even before it hit the ground. Faced with a mage, worse yet, necromancer, the other guards fled, not wanting to share their compatriot’s fate. Terrine regarded Lily coldly, causing the latter to hang her head.
“I couldn’t help it…I’m allergic to hay,” Lily said dejectedly. She dismissed the skeleton, and knelt by the corpse, and said a few words. A strange one.
Terrine shrugged, “I guess it turned out alright,” Terrine said, looking around. Stables were ahead, and a great barn loomed in the next to them on the right. It would appear that the cart was going to bring hay to the horses before stopping at the kitchens. And yet Auztil hadn’t told them that. What was he after?
The palace was straight ahead along the dusty road. The “Desert” in its name was a misnomer, as the palace and Daltropholis itself were many miles removed from the harsh sands of the Alinari Desert, which spanned the entire middle of Cerrinus. She realized Lily was standing next to her and said,
“C’mon, we don’t know where those guards got off to, and, besides, we need to meet up Alfred.”
Alfred. Something about him made Terrine uneasy. But she dismissed the thought; after all, how was he any different from the other dark priests she had worked with?
“Where are we supposed to meet with him again?” Terrine asked.
Lily answered simply, “In the kitchen…it should be on the palace’s left side.”
Terrine quickly caught up and walked slightly ahead of Lily. Terrine was worried about a sniper, and knew her light leather armor and buckler stood a much better chance against bolt and arrow than the midnight blue cloak Lily wore. The three of them moved silently, and then, suddenly, something was ahead. A figure that seemed to blacken the night around him with a sword somehow darker than anything else. Alfred. The sword glinted a slick red as the moon peeked out from behind the clouds. The stars shined dully as Alfred stepped out briskly from the kitchen.
“You’re late ladies,” Alfred said flatly, what must’ve been a vestige of insanity gleaming crazily in his eyes. It was Lily who stepped forward and offered,
“I’m sorry. It’s my fault. I sneezed and we were detected. They fled though…I guess my magic scared them off.”
Alfred’s eyes widened, not with concern or anger…but…contempt?
“You didn’t hunt them down? What if they alert the palace guard!?” he sneered, insanity shaking his voice.
Terrine shrugged in her uncaring way and responded,
“I don’t think it’s a problem. If they alerted the guard, wouldn’t we know by now?”
Alfred just looked at her as though she were disgusting. His glare made her uneasy, so she looked away. Terrine was careful to stay behind of Alfred, with Lily, as they made their way into the kitchen. She didn’t want to be anywhere near Alfred, let alone talk with him. The palace was quiet as death itself and Terrine realized she couldn’t hear herself breathing. A spell of Alfred’s for sure. She could then feel a sort of energy that somehow felt dirty and tainted sidle up to her about as agreeably as a bucket of ice water in a blizzard that made her feel weak, but the feeling passed as quickly as it had come. Terrine noticed that the guards they passed didn’t even notice their presence. A spell of silence and invisibility, Terrine mused to herself. At last they came to a gigantic pair of cedar double-doors carved with all sorts of grand-looking soldiers and dragons and the like. Alfred waved his hand, and the door opened silently. The three of them entered. Terrine realized she had been holding her sword out all this time, and looked to Alfred for an indication as to whether or not she should sheath it. If Alfred even noticed her presence, he ignored her. It was then that Lily said,
“Alfred, what are we doing here? We’re supposed to secure the throne room and distract the guard so the troops can secure the palace. This is the Emperor’s Quarters….”
Not even turning towards Terrine or Lily, Alfred answered, “What better way than to kill the Emperor?”
This was news to Terrine. But, one didn’t ask questions for the sum of 700,000 Anaurochan gold taels. Not even where a small-time assassin with ambition got it. But this?
“Alfred, must I punish you for insubordination?” Her voice shaking with…wait? Had mother sounded like that when…Terrine involuntarily shook her head. She didn’t like to think about that night.
Alfred finally turned around, a half-crazed grin on his face. The look gave Terrine a shiver.
“You would dare oppose me!? Hah. You know not what you do” he warned.
"Killing a baby is just wrong. I cannot countenance it, even if I must fight."
Alfred merely said a word and the woman collapsed in a heap.
“Come Terrine. Let us finish this.”
Terrine almost wanted to follow, but a voice in her head reminded her that killing a child would seriously limit her employment options with goodly priests, merchants, and paladins, all of which were typically generous with their coin where mercenary help was concerned. And besides, the bastard had hurt Lily, and obviously intended to kill her once he had “finished this.”
“No.” Terrine said grimly, holding her sword threateningly. Alfred turned to face her, his face strangely calm.
“No? What of the money? It is more than you’ve ever been paid in five jobs, for sure,” Alfred said, as if he were reasoning with a child.
It's-it's wrong.” Terrine responded acidly.
Alfred smiled. A horrible, twisted smile.
"Oh, that's quite alright. You see, you're killing the child whether or not you want to. And that's all you'll remeber."
He removed a purple gem from his cloak, which glowed menacingly. And Terrine's mind went blank.
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"How did it go?" Auztil asked.
Alfred smiled, "Perfectly, my lord. The woman will awake in the desert, her sword stained with blood. Her only memory past meeting me will be murdering a toddler. It'll destroy her, in all likelihood."
"And you placed her appropriately?"
"Yes. In the desert near Rinocca. Why did you want her left alive, anyways? Much better for your legitimacy if you had 'caught' her."
"Casus belli, naturally. Who can hold avenging the death of the previous emperor against us? It is, admittedly, a minor detail. It is but a training excercise, for what will come. But you must start small when your goal is to conquer the world and become a God."
Alfred smiled and laughed. If only he knew the truth.
"And Lily?"
"I have made preparations. She will be our first vessel, naturally."
"Hmmm, yes. I look forward to having yet more minions. I understand it will take some time to prepare her?"
"Yes, but no worries. An 'accident' can be arranged in battle."
"Wonderful. Now, leave me. I must plan my coronation."
Alfred departed, quite pleased. Everything was going according to plan...
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Terrine sat in the dilipadated tavern, ordering drink after drink. Somehow, someway, she had to get it out of her mind. Maybe 700,000 taels would make it all go away...

This one is actually a good deal older, and has been editted from its original version.
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