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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 14 '07

If you didn't read it while you had the chance, then that's fucking good for you.
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 14 '07

Someone fucking read this. I need opinions or changes.
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Ryo82439

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Sep 14 '07

I'll read it and tell you what I think tommorow.
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Phampy

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Sep 14 '07

That's a lot of dialogue...

I'll see if I have time this weekend to read it over and I'll try to help critique it if I do.
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demigodxyz

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Sep 14 '07

O_O, wow that's long. How long did it take you to write it?
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8558584!imx

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Sep 14 '07

this was cool

i cant wait to read the next one

when will you post it?
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 14 '07

The first one is barely done. I plan for this to be an epic series, such as Lord of the Rings and Star Wars (although maybe not as well known...)

I'll post more today. And to demigod, it took me two weeks to fully gather my ideas and write it.
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 14 '07

The first one is barely done. I plan for this to be an epic series, such as Lord of the Rings and Star Wars (although maybe not as well known...)

I'll post more today. And to demigod, it took me two weeks to fully gather my ideas and write it.
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 14 '07

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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 14 '07

Updated in both a seperate post and the first post.
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AgentParanoia

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Sep 15 '07

This looks interesting, although I'll have to give it a full read tomorrow or sometime after. And as for critiques and stuff, I know I'm no great writer of my own, but I do have a copy of The Elements of Style, so hopefully I'll be able to help at least a little.
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Ryo82439

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Sep 15 '07

seems good so far, but I'm not much of a critic. Didn't read the second yet.
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bobblyhead

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Sep 15 '07

This is a very, very dialogue based story, I'd prefer some actual paragraphs and stuff.

And either way, I love this stuff.

MOAR
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 15 '07

QUOTE (bobblyhead @ Sep 15 2007, 03:18 AM)
This is a very, very dialogue based story, I'd prefer some actual paragraphs and stuff.

And either way, I love this stuff.

MOAR

Don't worry, the later parts aren't diolouge. The later chapters will have a lot of paragraphs. I haven't written them yet =o
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bobblyhead

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Sep 15 '07

QUOTE (Anonymous @ Sep 15 2007, 03:29 AM)
QUOTE (bobblyhead @ Sep 15 2007, 03:18 AM)
This is a very, very dialogue based story, I'd prefer some actual paragraphs and stuff.

And either way, I love this stuff.

MOAR

Don't worry, the later parts aren't diolouge. The later chapters will have a lot of paragraphs. I haven't written them yet =o

Good to know. I'll keep an eye out for updates.
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 17 '07

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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 18 '07

Just so everyone knows (again) updated.
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 20 '07

omg
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anonymous!cherubi

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Sep 21 '07

bye bye
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Breloom

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Sep 21 '07

This story is amazing! I think it deserves more attention. biggrin.gif
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