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Jerem: Hey Feraligatr!
Gatr: Hmm?
Jerem: Come here.
Feraligatr and Kyogre exied Wailord's mouth, who then swam away.
Jerem pulls L-beast onto Kyogre, next to Feraligatr.
L: So what will you do to me hmmm? Feed me to your Feraligatr? HMMMM?
Jerem: Yes, but first, tell me something.
L: Why should I tell you something?
[I] Jerem held the dagger to L-beast's throat again.
Jerem: Let me tell you something first. No matter what happens, in about 5 minutes you will be seeing the inside of Feraligatr. Now, I can make your death fast, or I can make it slow. Make your decision.
L: Damn, I don't wanna die. But I must. I don't want any pain, so I guess I can tell Jerem what he wants.
L: Fine, what do you want to know.
Jerem: First, what was Ruesap doing?
L: Well, he's the basics. He faked his death, waited, after Iggy died, waited for the right time, then was gonna take over. But when he saw you, he called me to make sure you would die. Clearly he failed.
Jerem: Good. Next, What was a TLF member doing here?
L: Iggy had some of us go to all the citys throughout the world as overseers to make sure everyone did what they were told.
Jerem: Ok, now tell me, what do you know of the Anti Noob Forretress.
L: What? Never heard of it.
Jerem: LIES! I CAN SEE THROUGH YOU L-BEAST!
Gatr: And what if he's telling the truth?
Jerem: I'll make him tell, just watch.
Gatr: You sure you know what you're doing?
Jerem: Do I ever not?
Gatr: Once...
Jerem: Oh, well that's too bad because that was the last question I had. So I guess it's time for you to die. Feraligatr, midnight snack.
Gatr: Heh.
L: Jerem, you are a fool.
Feraligatr went over to L-beast and took him in his hand.
Jerem: Feraligatr, put him in your mouth, but do not eat him.
Gatr: Why?
Jerem: Let's see if I can get any last words out of him.
Jerem: Kill him
L: AHHHH NOOO! I SWEAR TO YOU, THEY WILL GET THEIR REVENGE!
Jerem:Good, but I need more info
Jerem: Wait Feraligatr, lets hear more of what L-beast has to say.
L: Never! Please, just do your work you beast of satan.
Jerem: No one says that. FERALIGATR, MAKE THIS ONE A SLOW DEATH!
Gatr: You don't have to yell.
Jerem: Ahh, sorry.
L: Jerem, you sick, twisted bastard. You have no value for life.
Jerem: Not true, I value three lives right here, and one is not yours. Feraligatr...
Jerem nodded.
Feraligatr unleashed 3,000 years of fury on L-beast.He slashed him, he gashed him, and he mauled him.He would slash his face then his stomach then tear off limbs. L-beast's blood spewed everywhere as his screams haunted the night. At last, with L-beast just barely hanging onto life, Feraligatr ripped his head off, causing his face to get covered in blood. Feraligatr then finished L-beast off as his body became motionless.
Jerem on the side watching, was enjoying all of it until he got sprayed with blood. Jerem had felt the same things as Feraligatr had felt. The anger of losing their rule 3,000 years ago. The fury of losing a soul. And the burning hatred of the killing of his earlier friends, Salamence, and Hippowdon.
Trapped in purgatory,
A lifeless object alive,
Awaiting reprisal,
Death will be their acquittance,
The sky is turning red,
Return to power draws near,
Fall into me the sky's crimson tears,
Abolish the rules made of stone,
Pierced from below, souls of my treacherous past,
Betrayed by many, now ornaments dripping above,
Awaiting the hour of reprisal,
Your time slips a-way,
Raining blood!
From a lacerated sky,
Bleeding its horror,
Creating my structure,
Now I shall reign in blood!
Raining Blood by Slayer
~~~~ 1 month later ~~~~
Jerem and Feraligatr are back at TLF headquarters. Kyogre was safe in Hoenn, guarding the 2 pokeballs. After having no contact with the Anti Noob Forretress, the pair decided to look around the place. They're in the final wing of the headquarters
Jerem: Finally, this should be the last area.
Gatr: Good.
The two walk down a corridor, and go through a door.
They see what looks like a ship yard, only no ships. There was a large water way at the end of the room, and next to one of the edges, was a wailord
Jerem: AH! Feraligatr, you see that wailord?
Gatr: Kinda hard not to but...
Jerem: That is the wailord from that incident with Ruesap and L-beast.
Gatr: Wo, so what do we do?
Jerem: Well first we need to "talk"
Gatr: Heh, I get it.
The two walked over to the wailord, which was sleeping.
Jerem kicked it, but it did not wake up.
Jerem tried kicking it harder, but it did not stir.
Finally, Jerem decided to walk on top of it, and he pulled out the dagger, and stabbed the wailord, which then woke up.
Wail: OWWWWWWWW! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!
Jerem quickly jumped down in fron of Wailord.
Jerem: Surprise.
Wail: AHH! Jerem....
Gatr: And your favorite Feraligatr
Feraligatr smirked
Wail: ...
Jerem: Soo... we just wanted to talk...
Wail: WAIT! THERE IS SOMETHING I NEED TO TELL YOU!
Jerem: Oh?
Wail: Look, I know I caused problems before, but I had no choice. Ruesap made me.
Jerem: Ok, well I don't care, you still did what you did.
Wail: I know... I'm.... sorry.
Gatr: Sorry doesn't cut it.
Wail: Well then... I guess you'll kill me.
Jerem: Yes. It's too bad though. We could use a wailord.
Wail: ...please...
Jerem: No.
Wail: I figured. Well, I guess nothing could change your mind.
Jerem: Right. Now stop stalling, I have things to do...
Wail: Not even...say a photo album...maybe yours?
Jerem: ...
Wail: Yes, I have it.
Jerem: Lies, Feraligatr saw you eat it.
Wail: Yes but some how, I did not digest it. So I kept it in hopes to give it back to you. I am truley sorry for what I did, you see in reality, I think you rock. Taking down TLF like you did.
Jerem: Let me see the album.
Wailord opened it's mouth and spat the album out
Jerem took it and saw it was the real thing
Gatr: So is it it?
Jerem: Yes...
Jerem: Feraligatr...
Gatr: Hmm?
Jerem: I...I...I don't know what to do.
Gatr: What do you mean?
Jerem: This wailord returned this, and that makes me want to keep it alive, but part of me is saying to have no mercy.
Gatr: Well...
Jerem: I... I'm confused. Maybe a picture will help....
Jerem opened the book and looked through it.
Wailord was patiently waiting.
Jerem could not find anything to help him.
He put his hand in the hole in the back. He felt something and pulled it out.
Jerem: AH! Feraligatr, I found something!
Gatr: What?
Jerem: A note...
Jerem,
I know that when you read this that you will be at a emotional conflict. It's ok. There is a way to grasp your memories fully. Assuming all went according to plan, then you should be in a large building. In a room is a machine. In the machine is a note than no one else should have found. Read that. It will help you.
-memories, year 1,000 B.C
Wail: So uhhh...
Jerem: Wailord, wait here.
Wail: Err ok.
Jerem: Feraligatr, we must go.
Gatr: Ok.
The two walked out of the room.
Back in the corridor, there is but 1 door left.
They go through
Jerem: ... What is this?
~~~~ Parallel world ~~~
We see the world that Jerem first came from. It was in ruins. All damage that Jerem had done to the normal world had occured here.The people were in panic. The towns were destoyed. Everything was on the verge of destruction.
We see the elders.
Elder1: So, are we going to do anything?
Elder3: OF COURSE NOT! Don't you see? Jerem has provided us what we have been looking for. Killing him now would be a shame.
Elder2: After all these years, I've forgotton why we did this.
Elder3: We stay here forever. We needed something to do. We created this world, in search of something to do. Having Jerem reborn here was perfect. Who would've thought that the son of Arceus was so evil?
~~~ TLF headquarters ~~~
We see Jerem and Feraligatr examining the machine. Finally, Feraligatr found the note.
Jerem,
By the time you read this I will be gone.
Feraligatr stopped reading,
Gatr: It's for you Jerem
Feraligatr handed the note to Jerem
Jerem,
By the time you read this I will be gone. It is time for you to remeber everything. On the back of this is a picture, touch it and everything will come back to you.
- Arceus
Jerem:!!!! Arceus....
Gatr: ....
Jerem turned the note over and saw a picture.
There was a group of kids in a circle. They were pointing and laughing at someone in the middle.
Jerem, and a totadile...
Jerem: ............................
Gatr: Jerem, are you ok?
Jerem: ........................
Gatr: Jerem....
Jerem: ...I... I remember...
Jerem clenched his fist
Jerem: Feraligatr... everything...
Gatr: ???
Jerem's voice deepened a bit
Jerem: This photo...
Gatr: Well... spit it out already!
Jerem: Why we are here, why we are doing this...
Jerem: All those years ago... Feraligatr.
Gatr: ???
Jerem: I lived in a village. We were in the mountains. I had no family. I lived alone. ˆ was around 9 or 10. I knew how to take care of myself. I went to school. It was a pokemon battling school. I had no friends. I never really spoke to anyone. Everyday, some kids would pick on me for having no friends. But there was more. When we battled, we could choose the pokemon we wanted. I always chose you, a totadile at the time. So after awhile, they started making jokes because I always chose you. I didn't care that they made fun of me. Me and you had developed a bond. But then one day, all those kids came. They started to make fun of me. Then others joined. Soon we were in the middle of a big circle. So then some of them started throwing rocks. There really wasn't anything to do. I tried to shield you as much as I could, but they threw more and more. So finally when they stopped I decided I wouldn't use you for a while. But then, when someone else chose you, one of the kids that really made fun of me. We battled. I lost, because... you evolved. The teacher saw and gave the kid some good markings while I was left to wallow in the pity of it. So that night, I bought a bunch of supplies and stole your pokeball from the school. I ran away, to the other side of the mountains...
Gatr: And then you let me out. You told me what you did. You also told me that you disliked putting me in a pokeball. So from there on out, I remained outside a pokeball. Things were going fine for a while. I was a young crocnaw and could catch fish for us. But then that pack of mightyena's attacked us.
Jerem: Yes, and for a moment were would have been done for, but you evolved again.
Gatr: And I was able to protect us. And it was then, that I felt the joys of killing. It is instinct to kill, but this was awesome. And from then on out, I was able to really keep us alive.
Jerem: Yes, and it worked. So after a few years, when I grew older, I started to plan revenge. Those fools would pay for thinking of shunning us. We were powerful. We were blinded with anger and hatred. So then at night, you carried me back there. You took all their lives. There blood was smeared over everything. And then, I could feel your anger, your hatred, and the joy of killing them. And it was there on out that our bond reached it's pinnacle. We could share thoughts, share feelings, we were connected.
Gatr: Yes. And then, we decided on what we would do. No longer would we stand for the world that we lived in. We wanted it to be out world. So we took it.
Jerem: And then we reach the Arceus encounter.
Gatr: It's all back.
Jerem: Yes, and it feels good.
Gatr: It's time, we shall rule again, and this time nothing will stop us.
The two looked into each other's eyes. Both were filled with a burning hatred of the world.
Jerem: This note... there is more too it.
P.S, this machine, you may think with your memories this marks the end, but really it is just the beginning. This machine will transfer Consciousness' of a pokemon and person who use it. I'm sure you can guess what that means. If you can't that means that every TLF member killed is actually still alive.
Good luck.
Jerem: ...
Gatr: So it begins...
Gatr: Hmm?
Jerem: Come here.
Feraligatr and Kyogre exied Wailord's mouth, who then swam away.
Jerem pulls L-beast onto Kyogre, next to Feraligatr.
L: So what will you do to me hmmm? Feed me to your Feraligatr? HMMMM?
Jerem: Yes, but first, tell me something.
L: Why should I tell you something?
[I] Jerem held the dagger to L-beast's throat again.
Jerem: Let me tell you something first. No matter what happens, in about 5 minutes you will be seeing the inside of Feraligatr. Now, I can make your death fast, or I can make it slow. Make your decision.
L: Damn, I don't wanna die. But I must. I don't want any pain, so I guess I can tell Jerem what he wants.
L: Fine, what do you want to know.
Jerem: First, what was Ruesap doing?
L: Well, he's the basics. He faked his death, waited, after Iggy died, waited for the right time, then was gonna take over. But when he saw you, he called me to make sure you would die. Clearly he failed.
Jerem: Good. Next, What was a TLF member doing here?
L: Iggy had some of us go to all the citys throughout the world as overseers to make sure everyone did what they were told.
Jerem: Ok, now tell me, what do you know of the Anti Noob Forretress.
L: What? Never heard of it.
Jerem: LIES! I CAN SEE THROUGH YOU L-BEAST!
Gatr: And what if he's telling the truth?
Jerem: I'll make him tell, just watch.
Gatr: You sure you know what you're doing?
Jerem: Do I ever not?
Gatr: Once...
Jerem: Oh, well that's too bad because that was the last question I had. So I guess it's time for you to die. Feraligatr, midnight snack.
Gatr: Heh.
L: Jerem, you are a fool.
Feraligatr went over to L-beast and took him in his hand.
Jerem: Feraligatr, put him in your mouth, but do not eat him.
Gatr: Why?
Jerem: Let's see if I can get any last words out of him.
Jerem: Kill him
L: AHHHH NOOO! I SWEAR TO YOU, THEY WILL GET THEIR REVENGE!
Jerem:Good, but I need more info
Jerem: Wait Feraligatr, lets hear more of what L-beast has to say.
L: Never! Please, just do your work you beast of satan.
Jerem: No one says that. FERALIGATR, MAKE THIS ONE A SLOW DEATH!
Gatr: You don't have to yell.
Jerem: Ahh, sorry.
L: Jerem, you sick, twisted bastard. You have no value for life.
Jerem: Not true, I value three lives right here, and one is not yours. Feraligatr...
Jerem nodded.
Feraligatr unleashed 3,000 years of fury on L-beast.He slashed him, he gashed him, and he mauled him.He would slash his face then his stomach then tear off limbs. L-beast's blood spewed everywhere as his screams haunted the night. At last, with L-beast just barely hanging onto life, Feraligatr ripped his head off, causing his face to get covered in blood. Feraligatr then finished L-beast off as his body became motionless.
Jerem on the side watching, was enjoying all of it until he got sprayed with blood. Jerem had felt the same things as Feraligatr had felt. The anger of losing their rule 3,000 years ago. The fury of losing a soul. And the burning hatred of the killing of his earlier friends, Salamence, and Hippowdon.
Trapped in purgatory,
A lifeless object alive,
Awaiting reprisal,
Death will be their acquittance,
The sky is turning red,
Return to power draws near,
Fall into me the sky's crimson tears,
Abolish the rules made of stone,
Pierced from below, souls of my treacherous past,
Betrayed by many, now ornaments dripping above,
Awaiting the hour of reprisal,
Your time slips a-way,
Raining blood!
From a lacerated sky,
Bleeding its horror,
Creating my structure,
Now I shall reign in blood!
Raining Blood by Slayer
~~~~ 1 month later ~~~~
Jerem and Feraligatr are back at TLF headquarters. Kyogre was safe in Hoenn, guarding the 2 pokeballs. After having no contact with the Anti Noob Forretress, the pair decided to look around the place. They're in the final wing of the headquarters
Jerem: Finally, this should be the last area.
Gatr: Good.
The two walk down a corridor, and go through a door.
They see what looks like a ship yard, only no ships. There was a large water way at the end of the room, and next to one of the edges, was a wailord
Jerem: AH! Feraligatr, you see that wailord?
Gatr: Kinda hard not to but...
Jerem: That is the wailord from that incident with Ruesap and L-beast.
Gatr: Wo, so what do we do?
Jerem: Well first we need to "talk"
Gatr: Heh, I get it.
The two walked over to the wailord, which was sleeping.
Jerem kicked it, but it did not wake up.
Jerem tried kicking it harder, but it did not stir.
Finally, Jerem decided to walk on top of it, and he pulled out the dagger, and stabbed the wailord, which then woke up.
Wail: OWWWWWWWW! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!
Jerem quickly jumped down in fron of Wailord.
Jerem: Surprise.
Wail: AHH! Jerem....
Gatr: And your favorite Feraligatr
Feraligatr smirked
Wail: ...
Jerem: Soo... we just wanted to talk...
Wail: WAIT! THERE IS SOMETHING I NEED TO TELL YOU!
Jerem: Oh?
Wail: Look, I know I caused problems before, but I had no choice. Ruesap made me.
Jerem: Ok, well I don't care, you still did what you did.
Wail: I know... I'm.... sorry.
Gatr: Sorry doesn't cut it.
Wail: Well then... I guess you'll kill me.
Jerem: Yes. It's too bad though. We could use a wailord.
Wail: ...please...
Jerem: No.
Wail: I figured. Well, I guess nothing could change your mind.
Jerem: Right. Now stop stalling, I have things to do...
Wail: Not even...say a photo album...maybe yours?
Jerem: ...
Wail: Yes, I have it.
Jerem: Lies, Feraligatr saw you eat it.
Wail: Yes but some how, I did not digest it. So I kept it in hopes to give it back to you. I am truley sorry for what I did, you see in reality, I think you rock. Taking down TLF like you did.
Jerem: Let me see the album.
Wailord opened it's mouth and spat the album out
Jerem took it and saw it was the real thing
Gatr: So is it it?
Jerem: Yes...
Jerem: Feraligatr...
Gatr: Hmm?
Jerem: I...I...I don't know what to do.
Gatr: What do you mean?
Jerem: This wailord returned this, and that makes me want to keep it alive, but part of me is saying to have no mercy.
Gatr: Well...
Jerem: I... I'm confused. Maybe a picture will help....
Jerem opened the book and looked through it.
Wailord was patiently waiting.
Jerem could not find anything to help him.
He put his hand in the hole in the back. He felt something and pulled it out.
Jerem: AH! Feraligatr, I found something!
Gatr: What?
Jerem: A note...
Jerem,
I know that when you read this that you will be at a emotional conflict. It's ok. There is a way to grasp your memories fully. Assuming all went according to plan, then you should be in a large building. In a room is a machine. In the machine is a note than no one else should have found. Read that. It will help you.
-memories, year 1,000 B.C
Wail: So uhhh...
Jerem: Wailord, wait here.
Wail: Err ok.
Jerem: Feraligatr, we must go.
Gatr: Ok.
The two walked out of the room.
Back in the corridor, there is but 1 door left.
They go through
Jerem: ... What is this?
~~~~ Parallel world ~~~
We see the world that Jerem first came from. It was in ruins. All damage that Jerem had done to the normal world had occured here.The people were in panic. The towns were destoyed. Everything was on the verge of destruction.
We see the elders.
Elder1: So, are we going to do anything?
Elder3: OF COURSE NOT! Don't you see? Jerem has provided us what we have been looking for. Killing him now would be a shame.
Elder2: After all these years, I've forgotton why we did this.
Elder3: We stay here forever. We needed something to do. We created this world, in search of something to do. Having Jerem reborn here was perfect. Who would've thought that the son of Arceus was so evil?
~~~ TLF headquarters ~~~
We see Jerem and Feraligatr examining the machine. Finally, Feraligatr found the note.
Jerem,
By the time you read this I will be gone.
Feraligatr stopped reading,
Gatr: It's for you Jerem
Feraligatr handed the note to Jerem
Jerem,
By the time you read this I will be gone. It is time for you to remeber everything. On the back of this is a picture, touch it and everything will come back to you.
- Arceus
Jerem:!!!! Arceus....
Gatr: ....
Jerem turned the note over and saw a picture.
There was a group of kids in a circle. They were pointing and laughing at someone in the middle.
Jerem, and a totadile...
Jerem: ............................
Gatr: Jerem, are you ok?
Jerem: ........................
Gatr: Jerem....
Jerem: ...I... I remember...
Jerem clenched his fist
Jerem: Feraligatr... everything...
Gatr: ???
Jerem's voice deepened a bit
Jerem: This photo...
Gatr: Well... spit it out already!
Jerem: Why we are here, why we are doing this...
Jerem: All those years ago... Feraligatr.
Gatr: ???
Jerem: I lived in a village. We were in the mountains. I had no family. I lived alone. ˆ was around 9 or 10. I knew how to take care of myself. I went to school. It was a pokemon battling school. I had no friends. I never really spoke to anyone. Everyday, some kids would pick on me for having no friends. But there was more. When we battled, we could choose the pokemon we wanted. I always chose you, a totadile at the time. So after awhile, they started making jokes because I always chose you. I didn't care that they made fun of me. Me and you had developed a bond. But then one day, all those kids came. They started to make fun of me. Then others joined. Soon we were in the middle of a big circle. So then some of them started throwing rocks. There really wasn't anything to do. I tried to shield you as much as I could, but they threw more and more. So finally when they stopped I decided I wouldn't use you for a while. But then, when someone else chose you, one of the kids that really made fun of me. We battled. I lost, because... you evolved. The teacher saw and gave the kid some good markings while I was left to wallow in the pity of it. So that night, I bought a bunch of supplies and stole your pokeball from the school. I ran away, to the other side of the mountains...
Gatr: And then you let me out. You told me what you did. You also told me that you disliked putting me in a pokeball. So from there on out, I remained outside a pokeball. Things were going fine for a while. I was a young crocnaw and could catch fish for us. But then that pack of mightyena's attacked us.
Jerem: Yes, and for a moment were would have been done for, but you evolved again.
Gatr: And I was able to protect us. And it was then, that I felt the joys of killing. It is instinct to kill, but this was awesome. And from then on out, I was able to really keep us alive.
Jerem: Yes, and it worked. So after a few years, when I grew older, I started to plan revenge. Those fools would pay for thinking of shunning us. We were powerful. We were blinded with anger and hatred. So then at night, you carried me back there. You took all their lives. There blood was smeared over everything. And then, I could feel your anger, your hatred, and the joy of killing them. And it was there on out that our bond reached it's pinnacle. We could share thoughts, share feelings, we were connected.
Gatr: Yes. And then, we decided on what we would do. No longer would we stand for the world that we lived in. We wanted it to be out world. So we took it.
Jerem: And then we reach the Arceus encounter.
Gatr: It's all back.
Jerem: Yes, and it feels good.
Gatr: It's time, we shall rule again, and this time nothing will stop us.
The two looked into each other's eyes. Both were filled with a burning hatred of the world.
Jerem: This note... there is more too it.
P.S, this machine, you may think with your memories this marks the end, but really it is just the beginning. This machine will transfer Consciousness' of a pokemon and person who use it. I'm sure you can guess what that means. If you can't that means that every TLF member killed is actually still alive.
Good luck.
Jerem: ...
Gatr: So it begins...
[QUOTE USER="CrossDragon" TIME="1199683080"]....Why is this so much fail?[/QUOTE]
Ahh, then why read it?
You see if you were to simply say " This looks like fail, I mean look at it, bad grammar terrible spelling, etc" the whole 9 yards, then I would accept that you truely do not like it. However, it is clear that you are reading this. And if you are reading this it is because that whether you would like to admit it or not, you like it. I don't care what the hell you say, if you've decided to read 100,000 + characters of " failure " then it is clear that yo want to read it.
CrossDragon, there is no reason to hide your liking of this story. Look at the posts in here, sure there is negative comments ( mostly from anonymous but hey, I killed him so it's all good ;p) but the negative comments meant that people READ IT. Now you might try to tell me " Well I'm only reading it to see how much it fails". Well I'd say you're lying. You are reading it not because you think it fails, not because you want to see how much more it will fail, but how much more you will enjoy it.
So Mr. CrossDragon, I suggest that before you decide to post another " this story fails " post, that you really think why you are reading this. And before you go into AssDragon mode, consider the following:
If it truely fails,
then why bother with it?
Ahh, then why read it?
You see if you were to simply say " This looks like fail, I mean look at it, bad grammar terrible spelling, etc" the whole 9 yards, then I would accept that you truely do not like it. However, it is clear that you are reading this. And if you are reading this it is because that whether you would like to admit it or not, you like it. I don't care what the hell you say, if you've decided to read 100,000 + characters of " failure " then it is clear that yo want to read it.
CrossDragon, there is no reason to hide your liking of this story. Look at the posts in here, sure there is negative comments ( mostly from anonymous but hey, I killed him so it's all good ;p) but the negative comments meant that people READ IT. Now you might try to tell me " Well I'm only reading it to see how much it fails". Well I'd say you're lying. You are reading it not because you think it fails, not because you want to see how much more it will fail, but how much more you will enjoy it.
So Mr. CrossDragon, I suggest that before you decide to post another " this story fails " post, that you really think why you are reading this. And before you go into AssDragon mode, consider the following:
If it truely fails,
then why bother with it?
[QUOTE USER="gameboy3333" TIME="1199688193"][QUOTE USER="CrossDragon" TIME="1199683080"]....Why is this so much fail?[/QUOTE]
Ahh, then why read it?
You see if you were to simply say " This looks like fail, I mean look at it, bad grammar terrible spelling, etc" the whole 9 yards, then I would accept that you truely do not like it. However, it is clear that you are reading this. And if you are reading this it is because that whether you would like to admit it or not, you like it. I don't care what the hell you say, if you've decided to read 100,000 + characters of " failure " then it is clear that yo want to read it.
CrossDragon, there is no reason to hide your liking of this story. Look at the posts in here, sure there is negative comments ( mostly from anonymous but hey, I killed him so it's all good ;p) but the negative comments meant that people READ IT. Now you might try to tell me " Well I'm only reading it to see how much it fails". Well I'd say you're lying. You are reading it not because you think it fails, not because you want to see how much more it will fail, but how much more you will enjoy it.
So Mr. CrossDragon, I suggest that before you decide to post another " this story fails " post, that you really think why you are reading this. And before you go into AssDragon mode, consider the following:
If it truely fails,
then why bother with it?[/QUOTE]
Ok, now that was fail. ^^^
Ahh, then why read it?
You see if you were to simply say " This looks like fail, I mean look at it, bad grammar terrible spelling, etc" the whole 9 yards, then I would accept that you truely do not like it. However, it is clear that you are reading this. And if you are reading this it is because that whether you would like to admit it or not, you like it. I don't care what the hell you say, if you've decided to read 100,000 + characters of " failure " then it is clear that yo want to read it.
CrossDragon, there is no reason to hide your liking of this story. Look at the posts in here, sure there is negative comments ( mostly from anonymous but hey, I killed him so it's all good ;p) but the negative comments meant that people READ IT. Now you might try to tell me " Well I'm only reading it to see how much it fails". Well I'd say you're lying. You are reading it not because you think it fails, not because you want to see how much more it will fail, but how much more you will enjoy it.
So Mr. CrossDragon, I suggest that before you decide to post another " this story fails " post, that you really think why you are reading this. And before you go into AssDragon mode, consider the following:
If it truely fails,
then why bother with it?[/QUOTE]
Ok, now that was fail. ^^^
I am your savior, I bring back Deleted posts from Hell. And I quote,
[QUOTE]~~~~ Somewhere ~~~~
???: Damn it.
???: What?
???: Jerem, he's found the machine.
???: So? He was supposed to, right?
???: Yes, but not for another few days or so. Well, no matter Ruesap, our plans are almost complete, and he can't stop us.
Ruesap: Are you sure Iggy? He's proven to be a worth advesar....
Suddenly the doors to the room burst open. As the light enters the room we see Raikou and Mewtwo sitting in chairs, looking at moniters.
Iggy: What is it Krew?
Krew: IGGY IGGY IGGY!
Iggy: Yes?
Krew: JEREM, HE'S... HE'S... HE'S
Krew was out of breath from running from a different room.
Iggy: Yes Krew, I know. Now, leave.
Krew: Wait... you said that you would let me use that machine if ANF helped you TLF'ers.
Iggy: That is true, but now is not the time, and damn it Ruesap, I can read your mind, I WILL NOT kill Krew because he's annoying.
Ruesap gave Krew a nervous smile
Krew: Very funny Ruesap. Anyway Iggy, you better not be lying or I'll... I'll do...
Krew took a long pause
... I'll do something.
Ruesap: Oh snap, help me Iggy, he's gonna do SOMETHING!
Iggy: Be quiet Ruesap; Krew, just wait a little longer ok? Ok good now, leave.
Krew: Fine...
Krew left the room
~~~ TLF Headquarters ~~~
Jerem: Damn it... DAMN IT!
Gatr: Calm down Jerem.
Jerem: DAMN IT FERALIGATR I CAN'T! I'VE WAITED 3 FUCKING THOUSAND YEARS! I WANT MY REVENGE! I WANT EVERY LAST DESCENDANT OF THOSE KIDS DEAD! I WANT THEM DEAD!
Gatr: We will, but calm down. Please Jerem, we need to think this through.
Jerem: FERALIGATR... I CAN'T CALM DOWN. I TRY TO BUT I CAN'T. THOSE KIDS FACE'S, THEY ARE CLEAR IN MY MIND. WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES, THEY ARE THERE. WHEN I THINK, I HEAR THEIR LAUGHTER. I WANT THEM ALL DEAD!
Gatr: Fine then...
Feraligatr whipped his tail against Jerem.
Jerem fell over on the ground.
He got back up, slightly calmed down.
Jerem: UGH! Don't do that!
Gatr: Sorry, but you needed that. Anyway, we need to talk.
Jerem: Ok. Well?
Gatr: Don't give me that. You know damn well what we need to do.
Jerem: No not really.
Gatr: Gah! Did that note make you dumber?
Jerem: Hey! Fine, just give me a second.
Jerem takes a moment to gather his thoughts
Gatr: Well?
Jerem: Ok, I'm better. To sum everything up, every TLF'er is a descendant of one of those kids. They made a machine to switch places between them and pokemon. Though their bodies are gone, they are still alive. We will not stop till they all are dead.
Gatr: Sounds good to me.
...
We see Jerem and Feraligatr
Gatr: Well...
Jerem: hmm?
Gatr: This machine...
Jerem: What about it?
Gatr: I thought you'd at least want to try it...
Jerem took a long pause
Jerem: FUCK YEAH!
Feraligatr rolled his eyes
Gatr: Well then, lets try it.
Iggy: Ruesap, turn the game off.
Rue: Why? It's just getting good.
Iggy: Damn it Ruesap, as much as I enjoy watching t.v in high definition, we need to keep track of Jerem's movements.
Rue: Oh fine.
Ruesap pawed at a button
Rue: I need help.
Iggy sighed
Iggy: Ok.
Iggy pressed the button
The screens now showed an empty room
Iggy: Crap... WHERE IS HE?
Rue: I don't know.
Iggy: DAMN IT RUESAP! THIS IS YOUR FAULT!
Rue: Calm down Iggy, you might break a t.v with your powers. Look, I'm sure someone else was watching.
Iggy: You better hope so or I'll...
Rue: Hmm?
Iggy: Damn it, Krew is coming.
Just then, Krew burst through the door
Krew: IGGY IGGY IGGY!
Iggy sighed
Iggy: Yes Krew?
Krew: CHANGE THE CAMERA TO THE OUTER SECTION OF THE HEADQUARTERS!
Iggy: Why?
Krew: JUST DO IT!
Iggy: Ugh, I hate when Krew does this, but hopefully it's Jerem he's trying to show us. Wait, did Krew just give ME a command? Well, his time will come soon...
What is this I feel? I feel so... different and yet, I feel the same. My hands, they are not hands. My feet, they feel so alien to me. My head feels heavy, and a snout is blocking some of my forward vision. I feel so, dry. I feel like, I'm in desperate need of water. And I feel so, hungry. ARGH! Why is everything so dark? Oh wait, my eyes are closed.
Jerem: It's about time you woke up.
Gatr: Hmm? Oh...
Jerem: So umm, how do you feel?
Gatr: Very awkward, I can barely lift my head, I feel like I haven't had a drink in years, and this hunger is killing me.
Jerem: You'll get used to it. Now, I think you should probably go to the pool.
Gatr: Ok.
****** Just a quick note, realize that Gatr is Jerem and Jerem is Gatr *******
~~~~~~~ 1 week later ~~~~~~~~
We see Jerem and Feraligatr in front of an iron door.
Jerem: Ready?
Gatr: Yes.
Feraligatr rammed the door, which fell down from the force of Feraligatr.
???: AHH!
Jerem: Shut up Breloom. I've dealt with you once, and now I'll do it again.
Gatr: Haha, very funny. Anyway, Breloom, prepare to die.
Brel: AHHH! SOMEONE HELP ME!
Gatr: No one can hear your. Now come here and embrace your destiny and die.
Brel: NO! PLEASE!
Jerem: It's no use, he's become as much a killer as I have.
Brel: WHAT? WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
Gatr: You fool Breloom, I thought TLF would know, guess not. Now, DIE!
Feraligatr ran over to where Breloom was standing
Brel: The lord is all mighty, the lord is almighty, god shall save me.
Gatr: FOOL!
Feraligatr ate Breloom
Gatr: We are your gods.
Iggy: Ruesap, we're losing members fast.
Rue: Yes Iggy, I can see that.
Iggy: Do you know what I think we should do?
Rue: No.
Iggy: If you want something done right, you must do it yourself. Get what I'm saying?
Rue: I think. You wanna take Jerem on?
Iggy: Yes. It will be quick and simple. One blow from my powers and he's gone.
Rue: Oh, heh now I get it.
Iggy: However, we need to get rid of Krew and his gang first.
Rue: How do you suppose we do that?
Iggy: We invite Jerem here of course.
Rue: ARE YOU CRAZY?
Iggy: Like a lunatic. Now, summon Krew, we have preparations to make.
Rue: Very well.
???: Yes, I understand-No, don't worry about it-it's ok, really. I trust you.
A phone is slammed down
???:DAMN IT! DAMN YOU IGGY! HOW DARE YOU CAST THE GREAT MOI ASIDE LIKE A PIECE OF TRASH TO PLAY YOUR GAME! HOW DARE YOU SACRIFICE ME! AHHHH!
MoI turns to a mirror
We see a tyranitar
MoI: WHAT THE FUCK!?
???: Ha, just messing with you MoI.
MoI: Ah, fuck you CrossDragon.
Cross: What's a matter? Can't handle a little scare?
MoI: Shut up, I was just talking to Iggy.
Cross: So?
MoI: He wants to go ahead with the plan.
Cross: What plan?
MoI sighed
MoI: Only the one that he told us about if Jerem ever posed a major threat.
Cross: Refresh my memory.
MoI: You piece of green shit. Iggy said that he would get all the top members and barracade Jerem in hopes of stopping him.
Cross: What's the problem? Do you think A boy and a fucking an overgrown feraligatr can stop us?
MoI: Maybe...
Jerem: You know, I think we should rest.
Gatr: Are you kidding me? I feel fine.
Jerem: I don't, it must be absolute torture for you to have to constantly rest.
Gatr: I never cared.
Jerem: Yeah well, I do, and I feel like I can fall asleep any second.
Gatr: Fine Feraligatr.
Jerem: Wo...
Gatr: What?
Jerem: Well, it feels weird for you to call me that when I'm you...
Gatr: Then I'll call you Jerem, and it will be like we are the other. And TLF will never know. Ha! I wanna laugh at my ingenuity.
Jerem: Someone's a little full of themselves
Gatr: ...
Jerem: Heh whoops.
Feraligatr knocked Jerem with his tail, Jerem, who fell to the floor, fell unconscious
Gatr: Whoops
Feraligatr smiled
Iggy: Damn it Ruesap.
Rue: What now?
Iggy: Where the hell has Jerem gone?
Rue: How should I know?
Iggy: I told you to monitor him, but I guess that's too hard of a task for you.
Rue: Well damn it Iggy, I'm trying to relax and you keep yelling at me to look at the screens.
Iggy: RUESAP! YOU USELESS SON OF A BITCH! DO WHAT I SAY!
Rue: WHAT THE FUCK IGGY! DON'T YELL AT ME!
Iggy: THEN DO WHAT I SAY!
Rue: MAKE ME!
Iggy: Ok then, I will. Enjoy the last few seconds of your free will Ruesap.
Rue: Wait Iggy, I didn't mean it-
Iggy used his psychic powers to take control of Ruesap's mind
Iggy: Sorry about this Rue, but I must do what I must to finish Jerem. Only I know his true secret, and if he finds out, we're finished. Not just TLF, but the world. I've been in contact with our other world Ruesap, I've talked to the elders there, they told me what Jerem is. I can't tell you, but we must stop him, not for the pursuit of our main goal, but to stop Jerem from taking his true form, among the gods of the earth...
~~~~ 2 weeks later ~~~~
We see Jerem and Feraligatr in front of a fort
Gatr: This is it.
Jerem: The TLF building. This place is where all our problems will disappear and we shall finally rule once again.
Gatr: If all goes well, which, without a doubt in my mind, will.
Jerem: Same here.
Gatr: Lets go...
Rue:Iggy, they're here.
Iggy: Good good, is everyone ready?
Rue: Yes Iggy, all members of the upper status are ready in the main entrance way waiting for out orders.
Iggy: Great, so the time has finally come.
MoI: Damn, damn, damn, damn, DAMN!
Cross: Calm down MoI, it's like 5 against 2. We won't die.
MoI: I don't care, I'm still nervous.
Suddenly a gardevoir walks by
MoI: Meno, I don't want to do this.
Meno: We have to, Iggy told us what Jerem is, we can't let him beat us.
MoI: But what's wrong with being ruled by some maniac demigod who kills for fun?
Menofuntall slaps MoI
Meno: You crazy kid, there is a lot wrong with that. The world will be thrown into chaos. I will not stand for it unless we do it. Now, you better fight till your last dying breath or I'll kill you myself. Understand?
MoI: Yes, but I'm afraid my last dying breath might be inside that feraligatr's stomach.
Gatr: Ready?
Jerem: Ready.
Gatr: C'mon, but be careful, they probably have guards or something.
Jerem: Ok.
Gatr: Also, stay close by me, even behind me, you can only attack from close range, and if there is a lot of guards, we might have a problem.
Jerem: Ok.
The two go through the door
MoI:ACK! THEY'RE HERE!
???: MoI, do not trouble yourself, for, your nervousness shall cause your downfall tonight.
MoI: Ahh shut up SNX7, you're just making me more nervous.
SNX: Hmp, fine then.
MoI: I bet you feel so confident because you're Azelf.
SNX: Yeah I do, and you're only Zapdos, but I'm sure that doesn't mean anything.
MoI: Whatever.
Gatr: Oh fuck. Feraligatr, we might have a problem.
Jerem: Yeah... just a small problem.
As the two stepped into the hall, they could see an Azlef, Zapdos, Gardevoir, Tyranitar, and Infernape
Jth (infernape): Hello Jerem.
Gatr: Feraligatr, they might not know we switched, pretend to be me.
Jerem: That should be easy, all I have to do is act cocky and over react when people yell.
Gatr: Hey!
Jerem: It's the truth and you know it.
Gatr: I guess...
Jerem: Who are you?
Jth: Let me introduce you to the crew, that Azelf is SNX7.
SNX: Jerem... prepare to die.
Jerem: We'll see.
Jth: That Zapdos is MoI.
Jerem: MOI! YOU BASTARD! I DON'T CARE IF IT WAS REALLY YOU, BUT YOUR HUMAN BODY SCREWED ME OVER! YOU'RE GOING TO DIE FIRST!
MoI Jth... help me...
Jth:Next up we have Menofuntall.
Meno: Face the power of gardevoir.
Jerem: Whatever.
Jth: Next is someone you should love, CrossDragon.
Jerem: CrossDragon...
Cross: Your death is inevitable.
Jth: And finally is me, Jth.
Jerem: Great great, now that you all have been introduced, I can take the pleasure it killing you.
Gatr: And I can take the pleasure in eating you. MoI, you first.
SNX: ...............
Jth: What is it?
SNX: That Feraligatr, it did not speak it's native tongue.
Meno: What'd you mean SNX?
SNX: I mean, it spoke our language, human. And just to throw it out there, but I think that that Feraligatr either learned english, which I highly doubt, or that that thing is really Jerem, and the Jerem we see before us is really that gatr.
Gatr: Good work, but no matter, do not think that you will have any of a higher chance of success in our battle.
Jerem: He actually has become quite good at becoming me.
Gatr: Yes well, I've had enough chit chat, I wan't some blood on my teeth and some TLF'ers in my stomach.
MoI shivered a little
Cross: Haha, I'd like to see you try and eat one of us.
Jerem (from behind): Guess we'll start with Menofuntall.
Meno: Mhhpphhpp
Jerem: Haha, looks like we already have one of you captured.
Gatr: Haha, that's great. While you were talking, gatr over there went and restrained meno.
SNX: You cheap bastard.
MoI: MENO!
Jerem: Don't come close or I'll rip his throat out.
Jerem pulled out the dagger
meno: MHHH!
Jerem: Shut up.
SNX: NOW MENO!
Menofuntall used a psychic attack on Jerem, which caused him to let go.
Jerem: GAH!
Meno: YES!
SNX: Jerem,or should I say Feraligatr, you think you can keep one of us like that? WE are the ones who will do that.
Cross: Yeah!
Jth: Lets see how you like it.
Jth ran over to Jerem and restrained him, keeping his palm over Jerem's mouth.
Jerem: Ugh.
Gatr: Nice job.
Jerem: It's not exactly a walk in the park you know.
Gatr: I know, I know. Anyway I"ll go help yo-
SNX: What's this? You two can talk telopathically? This just keeps getting better and better.
Gatr: URGH!
Jerem: Damn you SNX7, make Jth let go of me.
SNX: Now why would I do that?
Gatr: If you could pay attention to the real world while you could hear us, you would know that your team is yelling at you. Open your eyes to see what I mean.
As SNX7 was listening in on Jerem and Feraligatr, his mind drifted away from reality, and was now in the clutches of Feraligatr
SNX: ACK!
Cross: SNX! YOU DUMBASS, WHY AREN'T YOU PAYING ATTENTION!?
SNX: I wa-
Gatr: Say another word and I'll kill you.
Jth: DON'T TALK TO SNX7 LIKE THAT! YOU KNOW DAMN WELL I CAN KILL YOUR PET.
Jerem: What the fuck? No one calls me that.
Gatr: Don't worry, I'll take care of Jth next, but I need you to listen to me. When I say to go, I want you to do your best to wrangle out of Jth's grip. I'll hydro pump right in his mother fucking face. That should make him loosen his grip and you can run back over here.
Jerem: Got it.
SNX: I can still listen you know.
Gatr: Like I said, if you tell them about this, I won't hesitate to make you my first meal.
SNX: It seems pretty apparent that will happen anyway. Why should I let you get back where we've started only my side has one less?
Gatr: Because... you should make the most of the time before your death, do you want it to be a quick swallow, or how about I play with my food for a while?
SNX: Your threats mean nothing to me.
Gatr: Fine then, Feraligatr, change of plans, when I say go, you run.
Jerem Ok...
Cross: SNX! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? USE YOUR ATTACK NOW!
Gatr: I'm afraid that won't be happening.
Feraligatr quickly launched a hydro pump at Jth, wh was not expecting it, and he was thrown against the back wall by the blast.
Gatr: GO!
Cross: SNX7!
Gatr: Yes SNX7, say one last thing to CrossDragon before you die.
SNX: I... I'm sorry I can't do anything.
Meno: SNX!
Feraligatr shoved SNX7 into his mouth, then after several crunches, he swallowed.
MoI: SNX... what have we done?
Gatr: You shut up. It's clear he was ready to die. It is also clear that you were ready to let him die. If you truely wanted to save him, you would have attacked me.
Jerem: But you didn't, so it's pretty safe to assume that each of you would want the other one dead.
Cross: And jut how do you know that it wasn't just fear that stopped us?
Gatr: Boy, if you were scared, you would have never been here.
Cross: ...
Meno: Jth, what do we do now?
Jth, who had fainted from the impact, was against the wall
Gatr: Need some advice? Here's some: if you want to live, then sacrifice Jth. What use to you is he now? I'll let one of you live, but only one. Make your choice.
Cross: You're lying.
Jerem: You bet he is, but what does it matter to you if Jth dies now?
Cross: I... I guess it wouldn't matter...
Gatr: So then, can either of you two tell me why?
Meno: Not really.
MoI: ...
Gatr: well then, it's clear Jth will die now.
Feraligatr walked over to Jth, and ate him
Gatr: Delicious.
Meno: Jth... we're sorry.
Jerem: Cut the crap you three. Once again you have shown no care to a fallen friend. So now, which one of you wants to go next?
MoI: ...
Gatr: Hmm? What was that MoI? Did you just volunteer?
Meno: I think he did.
Cross: Uhh yeah, I bet he did.
MoI: WHAT!?
Gatr: Oh really? How nice of you.
Feraligatr ran over to where MoI was
Gatr: Well sadly, you are to large for me, but I'm sure your neck cuts like butter. Any last words?
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[QUOTE]~~~~ Somewhere ~~~~
???: Damn it.
???: What?
???: Jerem, he's found the machine.
???: So? He was supposed to, right?
???: Yes, but not for another few days or so. Well, no matter Ruesap, our plans are almost complete, and he can't stop us.
Ruesap: Are you sure Iggy? He's proven to be a worth advesar....
Suddenly the doors to the room burst open. As the light enters the room we see Raikou and Mewtwo sitting in chairs, looking at moniters.
Iggy: What is it Krew?
Krew: IGGY IGGY IGGY!
Iggy: Yes?
Krew: JEREM, HE'S... HE'S... HE'S
Krew was out of breath from running from a different room.
Iggy: Yes Krew, I know. Now, leave.
Krew: Wait... you said that you would let me use that machine if ANF helped you TLF'ers.
Iggy: That is true, but now is not the time, and damn it Ruesap, I can read your mind, I WILL NOT kill Krew because he's annoying.
Ruesap gave Krew a nervous smile
Krew: Very funny Ruesap. Anyway Iggy, you better not be lying or I'll... I'll do...
Krew took a long pause
... I'll do something.
Ruesap: Oh snap, help me Iggy, he's gonna do SOMETHING!
Iggy: Be quiet Ruesap; Krew, just wait a little longer ok? Ok good now, leave.
Krew: Fine...
Krew left the room
~~~ TLF Headquarters ~~~
Jerem: Damn it... DAMN IT!
Gatr: Calm down Jerem.
Jerem: DAMN IT FERALIGATR I CAN'T! I'VE WAITED 3 FUCKING THOUSAND YEARS! I WANT MY REVENGE! I WANT EVERY LAST DESCENDANT OF THOSE KIDS DEAD! I WANT THEM DEAD!
Gatr: We will, but calm down. Please Jerem, we need to think this through.
Jerem: FERALIGATR... I CAN'T CALM DOWN. I TRY TO BUT I CAN'T. THOSE KIDS FACE'S, THEY ARE CLEAR IN MY MIND. WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES, THEY ARE THERE. WHEN I THINK, I HEAR THEIR LAUGHTER. I WANT THEM ALL DEAD!
Gatr: Fine then...
Feraligatr whipped his tail against Jerem.
Jerem fell over on the ground.
He got back up, slightly calmed down.
Jerem: UGH! Don't do that!
Gatr: Sorry, but you needed that. Anyway, we need to talk.
Jerem: Ok. Well?
Gatr: Don't give me that. You know damn well what we need to do.
Jerem: No not really.
Gatr: Gah! Did that note make you dumber?
Jerem: Hey! Fine, just give me a second.
Jerem takes a moment to gather his thoughts
Gatr: Well?
Jerem: Ok, I'm better. To sum everything up, every TLF'er is a descendant of one of those kids. They made a machine to switch places between them and pokemon. Though their bodies are gone, they are still alive. We will not stop till they all are dead.
Gatr: Sounds good to me.
...
We see Jerem and Feraligatr
Gatr: Well...
Jerem: hmm?
Gatr: This machine...
Jerem: What about it?
Gatr: I thought you'd at least want to try it...
Jerem took a long pause
Jerem: FUCK YEAH!
Feraligatr rolled his eyes
Gatr: Well then, lets try it.
Iggy: Ruesap, turn the game off.
Rue: Why? It's just getting good.
Iggy: Damn it Ruesap, as much as I enjoy watching t.v in high definition, we need to keep track of Jerem's movements.
Rue: Oh fine.
Ruesap pawed at a button
Rue: I need help.
Iggy sighed
Iggy: Ok.
Iggy pressed the button
The screens now showed an empty room
Iggy: Crap... WHERE IS HE?
Rue: I don't know.
Iggy: DAMN IT RUESAP! THIS IS YOUR FAULT!
Rue: Calm down Iggy, you might break a t.v with your powers. Look, I'm sure someone else was watching.
Iggy: You better hope so or I'll...
Rue: Hmm?
Iggy: Damn it, Krew is coming.
Just then, Krew burst through the door
Krew: IGGY IGGY IGGY!
Iggy sighed
Iggy: Yes Krew?
Krew: CHANGE THE CAMERA TO THE OUTER SECTION OF THE HEADQUARTERS!
Iggy: Why?
Krew: JUST DO IT!
Iggy: Ugh, I hate when Krew does this, but hopefully it's Jerem he's trying to show us. Wait, did Krew just give ME a command? Well, his time will come soon...
What is this I feel? I feel so... different and yet, I feel the same. My hands, they are not hands. My feet, they feel so alien to me. My head feels heavy, and a snout is blocking some of my forward vision. I feel so, dry. I feel like, I'm in desperate need of water. And I feel so, hungry. ARGH! Why is everything so dark? Oh wait, my eyes are closed.
Jerem: It's about time you woke up.
Gatr: Hmm? Oh...
Jerem: So umm, how do you feel?
Gatr: Very awkward, I can barely lift my head, I feel like I haven't had a drink in years, and this hunger is killing me.
Jerem: You'll get used to it. Now, I think you should probably go to the pool.
Gatr: Ok.
****** Just a quick note, realize that Gatr is Jerem and Jerem is Gatr *******
~~~~~~~ 1 week later ~~~~~~~~
We see Jerem and Feraligatr in front of an iron door.
Jerem: Ready?
Gatr: Yes.
Feraligatr rammed the door, which fell down from the force of Feraligatr.
???: AHH!
Jerem: Shut up Breloom. I've dealt with you once, and now I'll do it again.
Gatr: Haha, very funny. Anyway, Breloom, prepare to die.
Brel: AHHH! SOMEONE HELP ME!
Gatr: No one can hear your. Now come here and embrace your destiny and die.
Brel: NO! PLEASE!
Jerem: It's no use, he's become as much a killer as I have.
Brel: WHAT? WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
Gatr: You fool Breloom, I thought TLF would know, guess not. Now, DIE!
Feraligatr ran over to where Breloom was standing
Brel: The lord is all mighty, the lord is almighty, god shall save me.
Gatr: FOOL!
Feraligatr ate Breloom
Gatr: We are your gods.
Iggy: Ruesap, we're losing members fast.
Rue: Yes Iggy, I can see that.
Iggy: Do you know what I think we should do?
Rue: No.
Iggy: If you want something done right, you must do it yourself. Get what I'm saying?
Rue: I think. You wanna take Jerem on?
Iggy: Yes. It will be quick and simple. One blow from my powers and he's gone.
Rue: Oh, heh now I get it.
Iggy: However, we need to get rid of Krew and his gang first.
Rue: How do you suppose we do that?
Iggy: We invite Jerem here of course.
Rue: ARE YOU CRAZY?
Iggy: Like a lunatic. Now, summon Krew, we have preparations to make.
Rue: Very well.
???: Yes, I understand-No, don't worry about it-it's ok, really. I trust you.
A phone is slammed down
???:DAMN IT! DAMN YOU IGGY! HOW DARE YOU CAST THE GREAT MOI ASIDE LIKE A PIECE OF TRASH TO PLAY YOUR GAME! HOW DARE YOU SACRIFICE ME! AHHHH!
MoI turns to a mirror
We see a tyranitar
MoI: WHAT THE FUCK!?
???: Ha, just messing with you MoI.
MoI: Ah, fuck you CrossDragon.
Cross: What's a matter? Can't handle a little scare?
MoI: Shut up, I was just talking to Iggy.
Cross: So?
MoI: He wants to go ahead with the plan.
Cross: What plan?
MoI sighed
MoI: Only the one that he told us about if Jerem ever posed a major threat.
Cross: Refresh my memory.
MoI: You piece of green shit. Iggy said that he would get all the top members and barracade Jerem in hopes of stopping him.
Cross: What's the problem? Do you think A boy and a fucking an overgrown feraligatr can stop us?
MoI: Maybe...
Jerem: You know, I think we should rest.
Gatr: Are you kidding me? I feel fine.
Jerem: I don't, it must be absolute torture for you to have to constantly rest.
Gatr: I never cared.
Jerem: Yeah well, I do, and I feel like I can fall asleep any second.
Gatr: Fine Feraligatr.
Jerem: Wo...
Gatr: What?
Jerem: Well, it feels weird for you to call me that when I'm you...
Gatr: Then I'll call you Jerem, and it will be like we are the other. And TLF will never know. Ha! I wanna laugh at my ingenuity.
Jerem: Someone's a little full of themselves
Gatr: ...
Jerem: Heh whoops.
Feraligatr knocked Jerem with his tail, Jerem, who fell to the floor, fell unconscious
Gatr: Whoops
Feraligatr smiled
Iggy: Damn it Ruesap.
Rue: What now?
Iggy: Where the hell has Jerem gone?
Rue: How should I know?
Iggy: I told you to monitor him, but I guess that's too hard of a task for you.
Rue: Well damn it Iggy, I'm trying to relax and you keep yelling at me to look at the screens.
Iggy: RUESAP! YOU USELESS SON OF A BITCH! DO WHAT I SAY!
Rue: WHAT THE FUCK IGGY! DON'T YELL AT ME!
Iggy: THEN DO WHAT I SAY!
Rue: MAKE ME!
Iggy: Ok then, I will. Enjoy the last few seconds of your free will Ruesap.
Rue: Wait Iggy, I didn't mean it-
Iggy used his psychic powers to take control of Ruesap's mind
Iggy: Sorry about this Rue, but I must do what I must to finish Jerem. Only I know his true secret, and if he finds out, we're finished. Not just TLF, but the world. I've been in contact with our other world Ruesap, I've talked to the elders there, they told me what Jerem is. I can't tell you, but we must stop him, not for the pursuit of our main goal, but to stop Jerem from taking his true form, among the gods of the earth...
~~~~ 2 weeks later ~~~~
We see Jerem and Feraligatr in front of a fort
Gatr: This is it.
Jerem: The TLF building. This place is where all our problems will disappear and we shall finally rule once again.
Gatr: If all goes well, which, without a doubt in my mind, will.
Jerem: Same here.
Gatr: Lets go...
Rue:Iggy, they're here.
Iggy: Good good, is everyone ready?
Rue: Yes Iggy, all members of the upper status are ready in the main entrance way waiting for out orders.
Iggy: Great, so the time has finally come.
MoI: Damn, damn, damn, damn, DAMN!
Cross: Calm down MoI, it's like 5 against 2. We won't die.
MoI: I don't care, I'm still nervous.
Suddenly a gardevoir walks by
MoI: Meno, I don't want to do this.
Meno: We have to, Iggy told us what Jerem is, we can't let him beat us.
MoI: But what's wrong with being ruled by some maniac demigod who kills for fun?
Menofuntall slaps MoI
Meno: You crazy kid, there is a lot wrong with that. The world will be thrown into chaos. I will not stand for it unless we do it. Now, you better fight till your last dying breath or I'll kill you myself. Understand?
MoI: Yes, but I'm afraid my last dying breath might be inside that feraligatr's stomach.
Gatr: Ready?
Jerem: Ready.
Gatr: C'mon, but be careful, they probably have guards or something.
Jerem: Ok.
Gatr: Also, stay close by me, even behind me, you can only attack from close range, and if there is a lot of guards, we might have a problem.
Jerem: Ok.
The two go through the door
MoI:ACK! THEY'RE HERE!
???: MoI, do not trouble yourself, for, your nervousness shall cause your downfall tonight.
MoI: Ahh shut up SNX7, you're just making me more nervous.
SNX: Hmp, fine then.
MoI: I bet you feel so confident because you're Azelf.
SNX: Yeah I do, and you're only Zapdos, but I'm sure that doesn't mean anything.
MoI: Whatever.
Gatr: Oh fuck. Feraligatr, we might have a problem.
Jerem: Yeah... just a small problem.
As the two stepped into the hall, they could see an Azlef, Zapdos, Gardevoir, Tyranitar, and Infernape
Jth (infernape): Hello Jerem.
Gatr: Feraligatr, they might not know we switched, pretend to be me.
Jerem: That should be easy, all I have to do is act cocky and over react when people yell.
Gatr: Hey!
Jerem: It's the truth and you know it.
Gatr: I guess...
Jerem: Who are you?
Jth: Let me introduce you to the crew, that Azelf is SNX7.
SNX: Jerem... prepare to die.
Jerem: We'll see.
Jth: That Zapdos is MoI.
Jerem: MOI! YOU BASTARD! I DON'T CARE IF IT WAS REALLY YOU, BUT YOUR HUMAN BODY SCREWED ME OVER! YOU'RE GOING TO DIE FIRST!
MoI Jth... help me...
Jth:Next up we have Menofuntall.
Meno: Face the power of gardevoir.
Jerem: Whatever.
Jth: Next is someone you should love, CrossDragon.
Jerem: CrossDragon...
Cross: Your death is inevitable.
Jth: And finally is me, Jth.
Jerem: Great great, now that you all have been introduced, I can take the pleasure it killing you.
Gatr: And I can take the pleasure in eating you. MoI, you first.
SNX: ...............
Jth: What is it?
SNX: That Feraligatr, it did not speak it's native tongue.
Meno: What'd you mean SNX?
SNX: I mean, it spoke our language, human. And just to throw it out there, but I think that that Feraligatr either learned english, which I highly doubt, or that that thing is really Jerem, and the Jerem we see before us is really that gatr.
Gatr: Good work, but no matter, do not think that you will have any of a higher chance of success in our battle.
Jerem: He actually has become quite good at becoming me.
Gatr: Yes well, I've had enough chit chat, I wan't some blood on my teeth and some TLF'ers in my stomach.
MoI shivered a little
Cross: Haha, I'd like to see you try and eat one of us.
Jerem (from behind): Guess we'll start with Menofuntall.
Meno: Mhhpphhpp
Jerem: Haha, looks like we already have one of you captured.
Gatr: Haha, that's great. While you were talking, gatr over there went and restrained meno.
SNX: You cheap bastard.
MoI: MENO!
Jerem: Don't come close or I'll rip his throat out.
Jerem pulled out the dagger
meno: MHHH!
Jerem: Shut up.
SNX: NOW MENO!
Menofuntall used a psychic attack on Jerem, which caused him to let go.
Jerem: GAH!
Meno: YES!
SNX: Jerem,or should I say Feraligatr, you think you can keep one of us like that? WE are the ones who will do that.
Cross: Yeah!
Jth: Lets see how you like it.
Jth ran over to Jerem and restrained him, keeping his palm over Jerem's mouth.
Jerem: Ugh.
Gatr: Nice job.
Jerem: It's not exactly a walk in the park you know.
Gatr: I know, I know. Anyway I"ll go help yo-
SNX: What's this? You two can talk telopathically? This just keeps getting better and better.
Gatr: URGH!
Jerem: Damn you SNX7, make Jth let go of me.
SNX: Now why would I do that?
Gatr: If you could pay attention to the real world while you could hear us, you would know that your team is yelling at you. Open your eyes to see what I mean.
As SNX7 was listening in on Jerem and Feraligatr, his mind drifted away from reality, and was now in the clutches of Feraligatr
SNX: ACK!
Cross: SNX! YOU DUMBASS, WHY AREN'T YOU PAYING ATTENTION!?
SNX: I wa-
Gatr: Say another word and I'll kill you.
Jth: DON'T TALK TO SNX7 LIKE THAT! YOU KNOW DAMN WELL I CAN KILL YOUR PET.
Jerem: What the fuck? No one calls me that.
Gatr: Don't worry, I'll take care of Jth next, but I need you to listen to me. When I say to go, I want you to do your best to wrangle out of Jth's grip. I'll hydro pump right in his mother fucking face. That should make him loosen his grip and you can run back over here.
Jerem: Got it.
SNX: I can still listen you know.
Gatr: Like I said, if you tell them about this, I won't hesitate to make you my first meal.
SNX: It seems pretty apparent that will happen anyway. Why should I let you get back where we've started only my side has one less?
Gatr: Because... you should make the most of the time before your death, do you want it to be a quick swallow, or how about I play with my food for a while?
SNX: Your threats mean nothing to me.
Gatr: Fine then, Feraligatr, change of plans, when I say go, you run.
Jerem Ok...
Cross: SNX! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? USE YOUR ATTACK NOW!
Gatr: I'm afraid that won't be happening.
Feraligatr quickly launched a hydro pump at Jth, wh was not expecting it, and he was thrown against the back wall by the blast.
Gatr: GO!
Cross: SNX7!
Gatr: Yes SNX7, say one last thing to CrossDragon before you die.
SNX: I... I'm sorry I can't do anything.
Meno: SNX!
Feraligatr shoved SNX7 into his mouth, then after several crunches, he swallowed.
MoI: SNX... what have we done?
Gatr: You shut up. It's clear he was ready to die. It is also clear that you were ready to let him die. If you truely wanted to save him, you would have attacked me.
Jerem: But you didn't, so it's pretty safe to assume that each of you would want the other one dead.
Cross: And jut how do you know that it wasn't just fear that stopped us?
Gatr: Boy, if you were scared, you would have never been here.
Cross: ...
Meno: Jth, what do we do now?
Jth, who had fainted from the impact, was against the wall
Gatr: Need some advice? Here's some: if you want to live, then sacrifice Jth. What use to you is he now? I'll let one of you live, but only one. Make your choice.
Cross: You're lying.
Jerem: You bet he is, but what does it matter to you if Jth dies now?
Cross: I... I guess it wouldn't matter...
Gatr: So then, can either of you two tell me why?
Meno: Not really.
MoI: ...
Gatr: well then, it's clear Jth will die now.
Feraligatr walked over to Jth, and ate him
Gatr: Delicious.
Meno: Jth... we're sorry.
Jerem: Cut the crap you three. Once again you have shown no care to a fallen friend. So now, which one of you wants to go next?
MoI: ...
Gatr: Hmm? What was that MoI? Did you just volunteer?
Meno: I think he did.
Cross: Uhh yeah, I bet he did.
MoI: WHAT!?
Gatr: Oh really? How nice of you.
Feraligatr ran over to where MoI was
Gatr: Well sadly, you are to large for me, but I'm sure your neck cuts like butter. Any last words?
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Deleted Post from Jerem and Feraligatr Part 2
[QUOTE]MoI: Thu... Thunderbolt.
Gatr: Hmm?
MoI: THUNDERBOLT!
MoI raised his wings, which made Feraligatr back off
MoI: THUNDERBOLT!
Gatr: Oh crap.
MoI: THUNDER THUNDER THUNDERBOLT!
Nothing seemed to happen
Gatr: HAHAHA! looks like you can't channel your energy to summon a simple storm.
MoI: AHHH! THINDERBOLT
Gatr: Now your yelling is annoying me. You get no more last words.
Feraligatr walked back over to moI and slit his throat.
Blood spewing, Feraligatr began to drink it like it was a water fountain.
Cross: That is gross.
Jerem: Ha, he truely is just like me.
The blood stopped coming from MoI's neck
Gatr: Now then, who's next?
Menofuntall and CrossDragon looked at each other
Meno: He is.
Cross: NO, he is.
Meno: What's a matter Cross? Can't you face your fear of death?
Cross: No, I am afraid of nothing, but what about you? How come you don't go next?
Meno: Ha, please Cross, you really think I go fourth? I go first or last, and since SNX7 went first...
Cross: That is a stupid reason. I'm prepared to fight you to see who goes next.
Meno: Bring it on.
CrossDragon whipped up a sandstorm
Cross began to attack fiercely, however, he never managed to hit Meno. Finally, he gave up after a few minutes. He then let the sandstorm die down.
Cross could see a weathered skull in Feraligatr's hand.
Gatr: Funny how that worked out eh? Now CrossDragon, tell me, do you fear death?
Iggy: Ruesap, what the devil is going on in there?
Rue: It seems Jerem has just killed off the last of the primary attack group, Iggy.
Iggy: Ugh, what do we do now?
Rue: It is my turn to try and stop them.
Iggy: Why thank you for volunteering, it's like you knew exactly what I wanted you to do...
We see Jerem and Feraligatr walking along a corridor
Gatr: That was fun.
Jerem: Yeah, I guess.
Suddenly Ruesap appears in front of them
Rue: You cannot pass here.
Jerem: And just who the hell do you think you are?
Rue: I am Ruesap, secondary leader of TLF, protector of Iggy_Koopa.
Jerem: Well here's some news for you Ruesap, in case you haven't noticed, we just killed off 5 of your members.
Rue: Irrelevant, you shall not pass me.
Jerem: You don't stand much of a chance against us.
Rue: We shall see.
Gatr: Prepare to die.
Ruesap's voice seemed to have changed a small bit
Rue: I won't die. Iggy_Koopa will not allow it.
Jerem: You sure put a lot of trust in him.
Rue: He can annoy me greatly, he also does things I dislike, like taking control of me, by which I was just released from, but anyway, he seems to have certain confidence in himself and he makes a great ruler.
Gatr: [/QUOTE]
[QUOTE]MoI: Thu... Thunderbolt.
Gatr: Hmm?
MoI: THUNDERBOLT!
MoI raised his wings, which made Feraligatr back off
MoI: THUNDERBOLT!
Gatr: Oh crap.
MoI: THUNDER THUNDER THUNDERBOLT!
Nothing seemed to happen
Gatr: HAHAHA! looks like you can't channel your energy to summon a simple storm.
MoI: AHHH! THINDERBOLT
Gatr: Now your yelling is annoying me. You get no more last words.
Feraligatr walked back over to moI and slit his throat.
Blood spewing, Feraligatr began to drink it like it was a water fountain.
Cross: That is gross.
Jerem: Ha, he truely is just like me.
The blood stopped coming from MoI's neck
Gatr: Now then, who's next?
Menofuntall and CrossDragon looked at each other
Meno: He is.
Cross: NO, he is.
Meno: What's a matter Cross? Can't you face your fear of death?
Cross: No, I am afraid of nothing, but what about you? How come you don't go next?
Meno: Ha, please Cross, you really think I go fourth? I go first or last, and since SNX7 went first...
Cross: That is a stupid reason. I'm prepared to fight you to see who goes next.
Meno: Bring it on.
CrossDragon whipped up a sandstorm
Cross began to attack fiercely, however, he never managed to hit Meno. Finally, he gave up after a few minutes. He then let the sandstorm die down.
Cross could see a weathered skull in Feraligatr's hand.
Gatr: Funny how that worked out eh? Now CrossDragon, tell me, do you fear death?
Iggy: Ruesap, what the devil is going on in there?
Rue: It seems Jerem has just killed off the last of the primary attack group, Iggy.
Iggy: Ugh, what do we do now?
Rue: It is my turn to try and stop them.
Iggy: Why thank you for volunteering, it's like you knew exactly what I wanted you to do...
We see Jerem and Feraligatr walking along a corridor
Gatr: That was fun.
Jerem: Yeah, I guess.
Suddenly Ruesap appears in front of them
Rue: You cannot pass here.
Jerem: And just who the hell do you think you are?
Rue: I am Ruesap, secondary leader of TLF, protector of Iggy_Koopa.
Jerem: Well here's some news for you Ruesap, in case you haven't noticed, we just killed off 5 of your members.
Rue: Irrelevant, you shall not pass me.
Jerem: You don't stand much of a chance against us.
Rue: We shall see.
Gatr: Prepare to die.
Ruesap's voice seemed to have changed a small bit
Rue: I won't die. Iggy_Koopa will not allow it.
Jerem: You sure put a lot of trust in him.
Rue: He can annoy me greatly, he also does things I dislike, like taking control of me, by which I was just released from, but anyway, he seems to have certain confidence in himself and he makes a great ruler.
Gatr: [/QUOTE]
Needs moar Ominous Doom as Deoxys/Mewtwo as a last resort. Liek:
Gatr: Damn you
Jerem: Damn you
Iggy: Damn... Oh wait, I just destroyed you
???: Not so fast
Deoxys shoots Hyper Beam from the sky and blows Iggy away
Doom (Deoxys): Fired and fryed.
Gatr: Damn you
Jerem: Damn you
Iggy: Damn... Oh wait, I just destroyed you
???: Not so fast
Deoxys shoots Hyper Beam from the sky and blows Iggy away
Doom (Deoxys): Fired and fryed.
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