Gaming@NINA

Ok i saw rpg maker xp and i started making my own game on it...i've spent ove 1 hour working on it and plz tell me how i'm doing:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=KANZQ953
<<<---Download Site...

Not a bad start but there is alot of room for improvement:

* Your game doesn't have have a storyline so it can be differcult for the player to know what to do.
* Your game is very event heavy with all the interactions such as bookcases and other objects, I recommend using a anti-lag scripts to stop the lag these events cause.
* Your map work needs improve I recommend reading some of my tutorials.
* Some teleport events send you to the wrong place (MAP010, MAP012 are a few)

hey how do i make a story line?

The same way you would write a story:

Come up with a Premise (Plot)
Decide on a Setting (Place, Time)
Make sure that the game's Setting has an interesting Backstory to it (History)
Create major and minor Characters (Hero, Party, NPCs)
Brainstorm for new Ideas (Its okay to use Ideas from other games, but be sure to credit the origonal creators)

Stick to these, and you'll have a good story in no time.

ok i have all of that but how do i put it into the game?

You use events