Gaming@NINA

I am making a game Gods From heaven and need people. I will list the people i need.

Graphics:

Artwork:
Map Design:
Tile sets:
Character design:
monster Design:

Audio:

Bgm:
Sounds:

Coding:

1 progameur thats good with rpgmaker XP code


I have so far:

only me ;D

Game so Far:
Resoursec:75%/100%
Story: 25%/100%
Characters:50%/100%
Mapping:10%/100%
Coding:50%/100%
Demo:75%/100%
Game:7.5%/100%

Story:
I enchance the story. I dont have 4 gods. I now have one i must make a story.

Characters:

Name: Gard
Sexe: Male
Class: Cleric
Age: ???
Special Attack Power: Light
Description: A The first and strongest god. He was sended to a planet by 4 evil gods. But when they did that he lost his memroy. No he is trying to regain his memroy. On it was way to regain his memory he and kay are trying to unlock they mistery behind the monster that are attacking the planet.

Name:  Kay
Sexe:    Male
Class:  Fighter
Age:      19
Special Attack Power: Earth
Description:  A elf. He was saved by Gard when he was attacked by three monster since that he was always with Gard trying to regain his memory and the Quest of the mOnsters.

Name: Ryu
Sexe: Male
Class: Thief
Age: 25
God Power: Wind/Thunder
Description: Ryu was llocked by the King and Queen when he was trying to steal the Royal Seal. After Gard heard his story he knew that Ryu was pure. Now Ryu is on the good path trying to be good and trying to defeat the Thiefs Guild who betrayed hm.

Name:  Nikki
Sexe:  Female
Class:  Mage
Age:    18
God Power:  Ice/Water
Description:  The daughter of King Rland and Queen Daisy. She was rescued by Kay and Gard when she was kidnapped by guild members of a thief Guild neardby the Royal City.

Sorry forggeted to post the website:
http://www.freewebs.com/sebastiaan1992

Just go to people needed for one of the places you want.

wow, your website has hardly anything on it

Well i started the website today a hour ago and the game yesterday so...

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Once ther were 5 gods. Those god wanted to create a world so they created one. On that world lived everyone in peace. 4 Gods were happy with the world but the fifth not. He sended evil in the World. The others were angry at him. The fighted him but he was to strong for the 4 Gods. Then they sacrifice there self to seal the evil god away. but what they didnt know was that the fifth god cursed them. Thanks to the curse They needed to live on the planet als normal people without there memory as gods. on planet start the gods a quest to retrieve there memorys with the 5 memory stones.
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Your story needs more details.  It takes a week (7 days) MINIMUM to write a decent story.  We need to know why they did what they did.  We need to know times. As far as we know, imediatly after this world was created, the 5^th god sent evil unto the world.

Story:  2.5/10
Nice basis, but it needs more information.  Rejected until repaired.

Take it to RPG infinity or rmxp.net, they will help you make it better.  You shouldn't realy start recruiting untill you have a few maps put together, and the opening scene at least started.  (I'm starting sound like Magnosan!)

Please work on your spelling and grammer.  It will realy help you look and sound less like a n00b.  If you want to see good, detailed stories, look at mine, Tails', most of the stories on rpgi, and rmxp.net (especialy the ones on rmxp.net with the [WOW] award).

Okay i will expand the storyline. But i cant change my grammar i am dutch and only 13 years. I can speak write english but my grammar sucks.

try to work on it though.  My thread on rpgi is the origional and as such, you can tell (from 2nd post on) how my story has changed and gotten better.  When I started, my story was a lot crappier and simmilar to yours.  With the help of people like Magnosan and Rogan Sarine, I turned a crappy un-origional story into a decent semi-origional story that will become more and more origional as the game and story progresses.

Well here i worked it out again it's not 100% but it's better i think.

Story:
Once there were 5 gods. Those god wanted to create a world were humans, elves,halflings, dwarfs and Orcs could live together. They created a world were those 5 races could live together. For each race was a god. For the Humans The Supreme God. For the Eleves The Goddes of Wisdom. For the halflings The Goddes of Live. The God of Power was the Leader of the Dwarfs. And the last was the Dark God of Chaos for the orks. There was peace for many years. But the Dark God of Chaos wanted that his race ruled over the planet. The other gods didnt want this. He was angry so he sended his powers to the world, He sended evil.  The others were angry at him. The fighted him but he was to strong for the 4 Gods. He tooked there memory's and sended them to the planets surface. Now are the four gods on a quest to retrieve there memory.
To retrieve there memory the need the 5 God Crystals. Now that the gods lost there memorys and The God of Chaos was the
only God. what shall become of the world that is ruled by the orks.

Ork is orc.  Other than that, it just doesn't sound right yet.

3/10 rejected until repaired.

Hmmm...looks interesting.

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I'm a big time expert on Greek and Roman Mythology if you need any help in that area.


Double Post Fixed ~Tails07

Well i want some greek/roman myths but i am expert at that area to.

Game so Far:
Resoursec:50%/100%
Story: 75%/100%
Characters:25%/100%
Mapping:5%/100%
Coding:0%/100%
Demo:10%/100%
Game:1%/100%

With the races you are using, you're going for more of a LotR type world than a Grek/Roman world.  I suggest you read The Silmarillion.

Yeah i know. but i want some greek roman myths monster.

i can help out whit some sh*t im only 13 but soa are you and im from sweden :P hehe
I can help with story (gramar :P) ideas and well ideas mostly :P
if you whant that im your guy ;D

well yeah can you help me with rewriting the inrto story i already have a main story ingame but no intro. :P can you help with me? Thnx

i will do it gladly dont kill me if its not so good right away and if i change to mutch :P(not going to change mutch)
yeah and i wal planing on to learn how to spell (and some grammar could be nice :P)

Som thing to read when you are going to the bathroom


Gods From Heaven


Many years ago there were 5 gods. Those gods wanted to create a world were Humans, Elves, Halflings, Dwarfs and Orcs could live together. They created that world called Nerum. On that world those 5 races could live together in peace. For each race there was a god.
For the Humans there was The Supreme God.
For the Eleves there was The Goddess of Wisdom.
For the Halflings there was the Goddess of Life.
The God of Power was the god of Dwarfs.
And the last was the Dark God of Chaos, the god of the Orcs.
There was peace for hundreds of years. But the Dark God of Chaos wanted the Orcs to rule over the planet. A fight started between the 5 gods, the Dark God of Chaos wanted his race to rule the world but the other gods wanted the 5 races to live in peace on the world. But the Dark God of Chaos was much stronger than the other 4 gods so he sent his powers to the world, He sent evil to Nerum.  The other gods got mad at him. They fought him but lost. The Dark God of Chaos sent the 4 gods to Nerum and he extinguishes their memories of being gods. Now the four gods are on a quest to retrieve their memories and save the world.
To retrieve their memories they need the 5 God Crystals.
Now that the gods lost there memories and The God of Chaos is the one and
only God. What shall become of the world that is ruled by the Orcs.


;P

Don't double post, use the modify button

Wow i like ty. Thank for da help. i give it a 8/10 :P

Sorry for the comment but i changed the story to my game i changed it a bit.

Many years ago there were 5 gods. Those gods wanted to create a world were Humans, Elves, Halflings, Dwarfs and Orcs could live together. They created that world called Nerum. On that world those 5 races could live together in peace. For each race there was a god.
For the Humans there was The Supreme God.
For the Eleves there was The Goddess of Wisdom.
For the Halflings there was the Goddess of Life.
The God of Power was the god of Dwarfs.
And the last was the Dark God of Chaos, the god of the Orcs.
There was peace for hundreds of years. But the Dark God of Chaos and 3 other gods wanted the Orcs to rule over the planet. A fight started between the 5 gods, the Dark God of Chaos wanted his race to rule the world but the other god Gard the supreme god wanted the 5 races to live in peace on the world. But the Dark God of Chaos was much stronger than Gard so he and The Goddes of Life and Wisdom sent Their powers to the world, They sent evil to Nerum.  The Gard got mad at him. He fought them but lost. The God of Power sent Gard to Nerum and he extinguishes his memories of being a god. Now is Gard are on a quest to retrieve his memories and save the world from destruction.
Now that Gard lost his memorie and The Evil Gods are only Gods.
What shall become of the world that is ruled by the Orcs and Evil.